| "A Different Kind of Sparring" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: A different kind of sparing
Reviewed By: Kyorocks34 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this pairing and the points you made were the ones I go by. I thought it was really cute how Shizuma came running to the hospital(or nurse office?) It showed he cares dispite what he says ^_^
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Title: sweet_T_cocoa_86@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: February 15, 2005 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mean to be mean but I didn't like the story. I don't know I think it was missing something special to me. You know something ou loik for in all the stories you read but you don't do it conscienciously. Well what ever that is your story lacked it for me. However You story was the only on I found that was not a cross over so I like it. So that's were the score of 7 came from. That and the fact that they don't do halves. We have to remedy this problem that everyone seems to have with crossing this story over with everything else. I have started to write a one shot and I could never see crossing thsi story over with anything I read. It just wouldn't work or make sense for that matter. Well anyway keep doing what makes you happy and Love MN
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: February 14, 2005 09:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I haven't read it but I printed it out. I'll tell you how I like it later. If it's bad I'll tell you it's bad. I generally read Inuyasha fanfics and that's all I have written so far. If this fic is good, I tell you and ask for an update soon. Now I have to go and finish the manga in my purse as I wait for 6 to arrive through mail. From now on I'll buy start from the store the mail order takes to dame long. Love MN that's Miss Nikki
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Title: THANKS!
Reviewed By: arcnine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been looking for a real bout fan fic to read. though it's not my favorite manga or all time, it still holds a special place in my heart. it's the very first manage i collected from beginning to end. i love that shizuma. yeah he's wild, cocky and loud, but oh man, he has such fire and passion when he fights. i hope you've read vol 6 cause it was awesome! ryoko and shizuma finally fights and they utter those three beautiful word to each other. even though it wasn't under any romantic circumstances or anything, but it was still sweet to hear. anyway, please do continue with this story. i'm going to write one also! we need more real bout fan fics around here ^^
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 16:35 CDT
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I have never read the manga, but I have watched the DVD episodes 1-13. I didn't quite get all the refrences because of not reading the manga but it looks like it is on it's way to becomeing a great romance fic. I hope you continue this fic. It has been quite a few monthes since you updated I hope you don't forget about this fic and leave it unfinished. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kouga_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE real bout high school its the bestest manga ever!!!!i wish they come out with volume six :'( oh yeah cool fic or thoughts i should put it u should make a romantic fic between them that'll be good ^________^
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Reviewed By: bakoxnako [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You used alot of phrases like 'O well' alot in your fanfic but otherwise i think this fanfic is pretty cool! I hope u continue to write more Real bout high school fics. Too bad they aren't at fanfiction.net yet. Maybe after they finish the manga. :)
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Reviewed By: forgotton angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is really good! i love real bout highschool and this is an amazing fic please update soon
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