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| "Gone" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: ummmmmm what.......?
Reviewed By: ELIE3173 (Girl3173ELIE@aol.com) On: May 21, 2004 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmmmmmm she doesn't ACTUALLY shoot herself in the end of the manga does she? Tell me you just made up that end scenario for the purose of this poem (which I enjoyed by the way, like the way you ended it, nice dark cliffy ^o^)....... wait, a minute..... i'm pissed at her right now, that bitch. ::waves a "poor kiley" banner:: I could care less if she dies now. oh wait that'll hurt poor kiley even MORE! the poor thing. But seriously, does it really end like that?
| Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Phoenix_writer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 10:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I have got to say that was interesting. The summary caught my attention and I was like, "What the h*ll?" And I'm glad I did, that was a good poem, kind of like the poetry I write, but never mind about that. You have talent, keep it up. ~Phoenix
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