Title: Very good, if I do say so myself.
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 07:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed several spelling errors, but that was really it. You might want to think of putting in the lyrics to songs in a different way. I don't know if you have a program that you can use that will allow you do do italics and still post it on MM.org, but I think putting them in italics or making them half a line then continuing on the next line. Reviews have no format, or else I'd show you. Other than that, it was a really awesome fic. Keep it up! --Anfan
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