| "Mai's Light" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice fic, and i about cried for joy when i saw it was a straight pairing lol! write more j/m fics, but try to keep them PG13 rated if at all possible :)
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Reviewed By: ottodude On: February 28, 2004 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, i just redd this fic, and you shuld do a J/M hentai or romance fic
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Reviewed By: 64587.pluids On: February 28, 2004 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fanfic was great, even if it was based off ep.? You should write a J/M romance or hentai fic.
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Reviewed By: Jou/yugioh On: January 12, 2004 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do another Jou/Mai Fic, But please make it a lemon. This story is an excellent one. It was lacking lemon though.
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Reviewed By: maijoeylover On: January 12, 2004 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE DO ANOTHER ONE!! IT WAS EXCELLENT! Next time do a lemon though!
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Reviewed By: pluto61 On: January 12, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic is great.You shuld do another J/M fic.
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Reviewed By: pluto61 On: January 12, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic is great.You shuld do another J/M fic.
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