| "My Gift to You" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 01:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute simple and lemony not bad at all.
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 16:53 CST
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Reviewed By: TopazQueen1188 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, THIS IS NOT A FLAME! Let me state that first. Good idea and nice set up. BUt just a few things irking me. Why did Sessy speak about himself in the third person? Rin does that not him. Secondly, well ya just bumped old Inuyasha to the curb. Not to be harsh cuz I did enjoy the story I think you had a good idea and you ran with it and it came out ot an ok fic, but you made all the characters EXTREMELY OOC- I don't think Kagome wood say 'Fuck me hard and fast' I dont' think she's readily agree to be his mate; things moved too fast. Uh other than that real good-later
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Great! That was so sweet! Adios!
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