| "The Shedding of Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Crazy Ash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 21:40 CDT
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Aww!! I feel sorry for Brock!! Is he still alive?
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Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 17:56 CST
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Hey to every reviewer again, listen don't just read my stories, please write a review so i know what you think, i know its taken a long time for me to complete my "The Shedding of Tears Pt.2" but thats because i want some more reviews.
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Title: Hello to my fans
Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 18:58 CST
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Hi, this is Zoid the writer of my zoids fics and my pokemon fics. I have just read your reviews and i am currently writing a continuation to the story "The Shedding of Tears". Here is a synopsis of the story: The story starts of with s summary of the last story and the continues with May then. The story which is called The Shedding of Tears part 2 will hopefully have you surprised and amazed with what happens to each of the characters as the story goes along. Something in particular which would be highly unexpected wil happen to one of our characters. I know which one, but its for you to find out. So stay tuned for the continuation. Oh please don't try to email me, my email thing isn't working right i am trying to fix it. However you can catch my aim screen name of RavenIron29 if you wish to talk to me and give me some info of what you think. Or you can just write reviews and tell me what you think. Sincerely, Zoid, i am not giving my real name.
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Reviewed By: City Starz On: February 19, 2004 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has caught my interest. You shouldn't stop there. I wanna find out what happens next I bet the others do to. Update soon! BYE!!!
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Reviewed By: Red X On: February 18, 2004 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Interesting! If you read this review then trust me on this if you put your fic in fanfiction.net then believe me you'll get more then enough reviews to keep on going with this. A fic like this needs to be finished. I like this fic alot. I really appreciate it if you could continue? Keep that site in mind fanfiction.net Good Job! Well, laterz...
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Reviewed By: mega_x5 On: February 11, 2004 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far it's a great fic, all it needs is to be broken into smaller paragraph so it can be read easier.
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Reviewed By: Fire Man On: January 19, 2004 22:54 CST
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You might want to think about making the story into little paragraphs so people can it easily. But besides that it was decent.
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