| "The Crow: Black Robin" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Goddessofimaginarylight15 On: December 29, 2006 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE SO F***ING AWSOME AT WRITING!
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Reviewed By: Twitch_6 On: August 10, 2005 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
i just read the first chap and doing ok. you stlye reminds me a lot of the way the original crow started all chunky though you could still use a bit more description on the scenes. but there's one big flaw here. what will drive robin to want to go back? he died alone. in all the oter crow movies and the show they always die with someone and come back to avnege their dead partner. they're mad with rage and confusion and a deep desire to go just go back to their dead loved one. but robin doesn't have that. he didn't die with anyone to avenge. sure slade is getting all uber nasty and with star telling him all that i can see that might bring him back to the living but what is going to call him back to the dead and without the double pull how is he going to go all uber dark and slightly demented? anyway this is a good start. your grammer and spelling are fine. i just think you need a bit more description to set the mood better.
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Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this one. Very impressive. If I would change anything though, it would be the Raven/Robin relationship. If you are going to imply that Raven has feelings for him then you should attempt to explore that. Otherwise it was a very good story. A+. I would appretiate a review from an established ff writer like you. Any constructive criticism would be helpful.
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Title: AY CARAMBA!!!
Reviewed By: Moon Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay!That story you did was VERY CARAMBA!because Robin and Starfire are to young to marry! will you tell Robin and Starfire that eh? P.S:Hey check it out! I made a new story called The diary of Selene:Beast Boy and Terra I hope you like it!
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Title: cuteness
Reviewed By: Lily Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooo cute and hot. You should make a sequal bt it needs more sex ahahahhahaa anyways very good but you weren't as descripted as it could of been but it is still good.
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Reviewed By: darknight2323 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. I've never heard of any plot like it, but it's convinced me to see The Crow. Please keep writing, for everyone's benefit.
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Reviewed By: HannaShields [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so mgreat i hope to read more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: TearsOfBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story it is very original and I have not read any stories with this idea in it. I love that movie The Crow. Keep writing
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Title: colpletly sweet!!!!
Reviewed By: majin lance On: February 22, 2004 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i believe your a genis but I HATE YOUR ENDING you left me hanging like that common you have to make another chaper lable: (ROBINS RETURE)PLEASE!!!!
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