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| "Boys in the Attic" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Title: sniffle
Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;___; Ken better be DAMN happy by the end of this fic to make up for how much you're making him suffer. It's -maddening- that he hasn't said anything to yohji yet ::twitch:: please please please start making things better for ken soon, it's making me so sad!!! (and this story's EXCELLENT, I wouldn't be getting so worked up over it if it weren't) oh yeah, and ryu and juro are going to get together, RIGHT?!
| Title: hi there!
Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: March 13, 2004 04:45 CST
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just some little notes: annunciation should be pronounciation, and when you wrote misuse you meant masseuse which sounds similar but have er, entirely different meanings. And that would refer to a female massage-person. A male one would be a masseur. ....I might have the e and u backwards there but I don't think so. other than that - fun chapter but no aya and omi? ? ? ^_^; Sad! They'll be in the next one though right?
| Reviewed By: Amanda. On: March 03, 2004 21:54 CST
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This is one of my favorite fics. I usually don't follow updates and stuff, but this one is on my favorites :) I'd also like to point out that this is the best title for a fic I've ever seen. I don't know why I like it so much, but I do :)
| Title: Praise and technicality
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: March 02, 2004 14:58 CST
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Yet another amazing chatper written. I honestly do wait with increasing anticipation for each chapter you write. I really love this story. So there's your praise ^_^ Now the technical bit: "Yohji released the pressure of his thumb from Yohji's.." That was when Aya was going down on Yohji, so, "Ran released..." That's all. You are amazing ^_^
| Title: 1
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 23:24 CST
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poor juro
| Title: Backdoors rock
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 14:26 CST
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Yes, found a backdoor through mediaminer that allowed me to read the newest installment. Anyway, very cool dynamics between Ken, Yohji, and Aya. Well, not so muhc Aya, but Ken's attitude toward him. I cannot wait to see how, IF, Ken and Yohji cna work this out. And I am on the edge of my seat to know when the non-con warning will come into effect. If it hasn't already in the early chap with that ewwy customer Yohji had. Anyway, keep it up please!!!
| Title: Oh I wish I wish....
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 14:02 CST
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So, mediaminer has it out for me...as per usual. Thus, though I have been bouncing in my seat for the next installment, I am unable to read it. Thank you mediaminer. But, rest assured, I will have rave reviews for you the minute mediaminer deigns to give me the privelege of reading you fic. Stupid mediaminer!! >_
| Title: one technical thing
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: February 06, 2004 22:12 CST
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okay, in one thing Yohji says to Ken "lye down." This is when Yohji is sitting on the edge of the bed and Ken is kinda afraid of how equipped Yohji is. Okay, so I think you wanna change that to "lie down." Just a spelling thing is all ^_^
| Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 21:03 CST
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Yay! So happy to finally see Ken get with Yohji. It was about time ;_; Dude, Yohji is dense. I hope Ken gets him for good. Of course, I don't like the idea of Aya getting left out either. I just want Ken to get him more. How bout a threesome? heh. I must say. I'm usually rather turned off by original characters, but this whole weird relationship between ryu and juro has got me really intrigued. I'm hoping they end up together (wrong as that may be). Lookin' forward to your next update.
| Title: Another love confession
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: February 01, 2004 19:40 CST
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Okay, so, again, I love you!! This fic is so entrancing! So now, the suspense, it's killing me. Wonder how the party'll be. and I also have to wonder what's gunna happen with Ken. Cause Ken's a -tad- bit possessive and jealous, which seems to be working up to something. Then Ryu is down right aggressive. Both these qualities are good...but only in -much- moderation. So I'm hooked as to how Ken's gunna react to everything and how Ryu is going to act. It seems, that once Ryu's set his mind on something, he goes for it. And what'll happen with Aya?!!? The people have to know!! In short, awesome!! ^_^
| Title: YES!!
Reviewed By: WK On: January 24, 2004 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!! I'm so happy~!! *dances* Wow, this was a really awesome chapter!! Haha, Youji's got so many admirers (as he should^^) This was really awesome, and though I feel bad for poor KenKen who has unrequieted love for Yo-tan, I can't wait to read what will happen when Aya and Youji finally meet again! And I feel like Youji's boss is up to no good~~ Well, I really loved this, just like I loved all the other chapters of this fic and I hope you update faster this time!! I can't wait to read what happens next, don't keep me in suspence, woman!
| Title: Can't say enough
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: January 23, 2004 21:56 CST
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Yeah, well, okay second time reading this. Still as good, still great with the romantic tension. I cannot wait to see what happens at Juro's party, nor what happens with Ryu and Yohji. Damn you for writing so well and making such an interesting premise!!
| Reviewed By: vv On: January 22, 2004 02:31 CST
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0_0 I wouldn't slay you. How would you write more chapters? Yohji is my favorite character, but you are really making me feel for Ken. Poor thing. His message is just not getting across. Juru needs some pity as well.
| Title: Slayings are postponed ~_^
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: January 21, 2004 23:58 CST
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So now, this is interesting. You've introduced a difficult situation, but with a substitutional solution. Ken with Omi as opposed to Yohji, IF things need be. I also can't wait for all this build up to come to a head. So awesome! Believe me, I'm ready and willing to wait 15 chapters for the build up to reach a peak. Sure, I'd much rather things move a tad faster than that. But writers must write at their own pace. Keep it up, I really and truly love this fic!!
| Title: Thank God!
Reviewed By: WK On: January 04, 2004 17:54 CST
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I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy you posted!! *bounce* I've checked this site *every* day to see if you added another chapter yet, I can die happy now^__________^ This chapter was just as good as the last one, the yumminess between Ken and Youji is really cute and intriguing, as well as the attraction Ryu has for Youji. And Aya has been asking about Youji too~ Haha, I hope those two get together, they look so sexy together^^V I can't wait to read what happens at this party though!!! Please please PLEASE update again soon^^ I shall be waiting~
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