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Title: one technical thing
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: February 06, 2004 22:12 CST
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okay, in one thing Yohji says to Ken "lye down." This is when Yohji is sitting on the edge of the bed and Ken is kinda afraid of how equipped Yohji is. Okay, so I think you wanna change that to "lie down." Just a spelling thing is all ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 21:03 CST
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Yay! So happy to finally see Ken get with Yohji. It was about time ;_; Dude, Yohji is dense. I hope Ken gets him for good. Of course, I don't like the idea of Aya getting left out either. I just want Ken to get him more. How bout a threesome? heh. I must say. I'm usually rather turned off by original characters, but this whole weird relationship between ryu and juro has got me really intrigued. I'm hoping they end up together (wrong as that may be). Lookin' forward to your next update.
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Title: Another love confession
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: February 01, 2004 19:40 CST
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Okay, so, again, I love you!! This fic is so entrancing! So now, the suspense, it's killing me. Wonder how the party'll be. and I also have to wonder what's gunna happen with Ken. Cause Ken's a -tad- bit possessive and jealous, which seems to be working up to something. Then Ryu is down right aggressive. Both these qualities are good...but only in -much- moderation. So I'm hooked as to how Ken's gunna react to everything and how Ryu is going to act. It seems, that once Ryu's set his mind on something, he goes for it. And what'll happen with Aya?!!? The people have to know!! In short, awesome!! ^_^
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Title: YES!!
Reviewed By: WK On: January 24, 2004 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!! I'm so happy~!! *dances* Wow, this was a really awesome chapter!! Haha, Youji's got so many admirers (as he should^^) This was really awesome, and though I feel bad for poor KenKen who has unrequieted love for Yo-tan, I can't wait to read what will happen when Aya and Youji finally meet again! And I feel like Youji's boss is up to no good~~ Well, I really loved this, just like I loved all the other chapters of this fic and I hope you update faster this time!! I can't wait to read what happens next, don't keep me in suspence, woman!
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Title: Can't say enough
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: January 23, 2004 21:56 CST
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Yeah, well, okay second time reading this. Still as good, still great with the romantic tension. I cannot wait to see what happens at Juro's party, nor what happens with Ryu and Yohji. Damn you for writing so well and making such an interesting premise!!
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Reviewed By: vv On: January 22, 2004 02:31 CST
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0_0 I wouldn't slay you. How would you write more chapters? Yohji is my favorite character, but you are really making me feel for Ken. Poor thing. His message is just not getting across. Juru needs some pity as well.
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Title: Slayings are postponed ~_^
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: January 21, 2004 23:58 CST
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So now, this is interesting. You've introduced a difficult situation, but with a substitutional solution. Ken with Omi as opposed to Yohji, IF things need be. I also can't wait for all this build up to come to a head. So awesome! Believe me, I'm ready and willing to wait 15 chapters for the build up to reach a peak. Sure, I'd much rather things move a tad faster than that. But writers must write at their own pace. Keep it up, I really and truly love this fic!!
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Title: Thank God!
Reviewed By: WK On: January 04, 2004 17:54 CST
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I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy you posted!! *bounce* I've checked this site *every* day to see if you added another chapter yet, I can die happy now^__________^ This chapter was just as good as the last one, the yumminess between Ken and Youji is really cute and intriguing, as well as the attraction Ryu has for Youji. And Aya has been asking about Youji too~ Haha, I hope those two get together, they look so sexy together^^V I can't wait to read what happens at this party though!!! Please please PLEASE update again soon^^ I shall be waiting~
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Title: Happy Day ^_^
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: January 03, 2004 19:43 CST
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I think the subject line pretty much says it all O_O Me are not smart, so no prolific things to say. Keep writing and I will continue to love you ^_^
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Reviewed By: Square On: December 31, 2003 13:41 CST
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Please write the second chapter to this fic soon!! I enjoyed reading it so much that I read it three times before I stopped~ I can't wait to see what happens next, please update^^
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Reviewed By: AnnaHibiki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 03:52 CST
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waii!! love it so far! ^^ I hope this turns out as YoujiKen at the end, Yo-tan can't leave his KenKen like that!
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Reviewed By: fadedLily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 13:29 CST
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This is pretty cool. I love the ideas you've started to bring forth in this chapter. Hope you write more soon.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: WK On: December 25, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is excellent. You've truly got me hooked, and I can't wait to see what happens when Youji meets Ran *smirks* Please update soon, I really do enjoy this and can't wait to read more.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: December 25, 2003 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've definitely caught my interest and have now a vise-like grip! Whcih is something considering I both lack an attention span (oooh butterfly!) and braincells (...oooh butterfly!). This is really original, and you're charaterizations are intriguing. I'd LOVE to know where you go wtih this. Please continue, I really think you've got a great thing started here.
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Reviewed By: Jenna On: December 25, 2003 01:25 CST
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Ok i give you permission to write more.
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