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| "Love Duet" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: insanecherry/& hot shot On: January 30, 2004 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
insanecherry:mmm, tat was interesting in a ammm,hot shit help me here. u're the not so easy going type. hot shot: i don't get it at school you're tough and you, but when telling people what you really want to them, you go all easy. insane cherry: iguess i'm a person who don't like sadness, now tell wat u think. hot shot: i'm going to give it to you straight unlike someone i know. insanecherry:hey! hot shot: here it goes, i think that for a 13 teen year old girl, you got some imagenation. i don't like you're story. i think you need to start on another fanfic and less sexual desire okay. insanecherry:at least u went easy on her.okay tis is wat i think. i think u're agreat writer,but u might want to direct u'r creativity towards a diffrent direction for now, to draw in readers. then u can change ur direction towards a different light if u want. u think differently then other fanfic writer which is good ,but u might want 2 take something out and put new things in , but still keep ur idea in okay. i hope u finish the story ,but plz tell things r going 2 be alot better. hot shot: i think you handle it very well. insanecherry: thank u insanecherry/hot shot:bye
| Reviewed By: Goddess of Jupiter On: January 12, 2004 17:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, I was looking for a Meilin/Li fic and were Li was good to her. Not a fic were Li half rape her!!!!!!!!!!!! Please tell thing get better!
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