| "Past Pain, Present Love" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Title: great
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 21:36 CST
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Great chapter. When are you bringing in the Yu Yu gang. Update again soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Allicat On: February 07, 2004 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah!!! u can't just leave us hanging like this!! whaaaa!!! i can't wait til sat!!! *whimpers* *big teary anime eyes...sniff sniff* yoink!!! i've grabbed kurama and is holding him hostage *muah!!* until u post another chapter *evil smirk* write or else he will be mine!!! muahahahahhahahahahahhaha *tasuki enters: fwap!!! *hits head w/ fan and drags her away*..."don't worry about her, just write that next chapter."
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv your story!!! don't mind all that much about the spelling. i just love the plot tho. excellent!!! keep up the good work and please please continue!!!.
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Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 18:07 CST
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I'm sorry but I am completey and utterly confused about the dragons. Oh, and when are the Yu Yu gang coming? And who are the couples?
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 (not loged in) On: February 02, 2004 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is so good Plz update ASAP OK OH and PLz Make this a sess/kag fic PLz
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Reviewed By: chelsie On: February 02, 2004 09:55 CST
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ok is it just me or was that almost all about the movie "X"? oh probably just me
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 05:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO that was a great fic (it kicks demon ass!!) !!!!!!! Please UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Melshenia On: January 23, 2004 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mouth hangs open* i am so confused. ok here is a suggestion, you need to take the story a little slower and give more information. oh and can you make the chapters longer. other than that i really like the story, it was just a little confusing. keep up the good writing, and i can't wait till you next update. Melshenia Kari Email: Melsheniakari@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 15:06 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! update like NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz plz plz!!!!! make it a kagome/hiei fic plz!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 08:58 CST
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your story is good, I like it alot, but if you could not interupt in the middle of sentences and stuff it woud be very very very very good.
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: AyealisKomori(Bat) ^^ On: January 15, 2004 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like dah story...i really think you should write more really soon ^-^
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the interesting work. Like the story!! Want to see more of it.
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Reviewed By: Daneru On: January 10, 2004 11:21 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE,UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i MUST know more!!!!!
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Title: past pain/present plesure
Reviewed By: Daneru On: January 10, 2004 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
style of writing:7 because its easy to follow and you keep a reader interested but you sometimes cut in at inconvinient places and break the flow of the story. i like the way you translate the japanese words into english as the story goes :3! Spelling/grammer: there were some misspelled words example, here was supposed to be her. but you did great with spelling! originality: so far your story follows the heart break b/c inu whent for kikyo line but so far im not boared to death b/c ive heard this story time MILLIONS of times in the past! great job on keeping a reader iterested suchi! Enjoyment: i LOVE reading your story!! im so glad youve got your works out there on the internet! just like you wanted, im proud of you! you deserve a 10+ overall rateing
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