| "Didn't you Notice?" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
Reviewed By: spitfire17268 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why haven't you finished your story "Didn't You Notice?" yet, I really enjoyed what you've written so far and would like to read more. If you ask me Kagome should end up with one of the following (maybe even all of them, Hiei, Sesshomaru, Kurama, or InuYasha.
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Title: Didn't You Notice?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Didn't you Notice?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 12:22 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome please.
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Title: Didn't You Notice?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 18:53 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kai-Koiji On: August 14, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh great story ^_~ keep it yup
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 01:32 CDT
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this is one of the best fics i ever read plz update really soon and if you get stuck here's some advice stop trying so hard and take a deep breath
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Title: Dude....
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 *not logged in* On: August 11, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude u have lost nothing. Just try not to pull that shit again. O yea and a tip for writers block. Just write down scenses and stuff then add them togeher. In the long runit really helps. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ris On: August 11, 2004 22:25 CDT
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Hey this is a really great story i love it you have to update it really soon ok thanks Ja ne. ~Ris~
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Title: I'm Back!
Reviewed By: Queen_of_Blades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 03:37 CDT
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I'm back and better than every ... i hope just gimme a few more days to get the chappie up. I love u all and am soooo sorry, and totally understand if you dont want to read ne more. Lots of Love ~Queeny~
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Title: DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE HAVE KOGA INU AND KAGOME KILL NARAKU! NO HAVE KAGOME KILL HIM AND DIE. YEA. MAKE IT REAL SAD. ALL I NO IF U MAKIN THIS A LEMON MAKE IT INU AND KAGOME. HAVE NARAKU RAPE HER MOTHER IN FRONT OF HER AS WELL. THATS WHAT IT LOOKED LIKE IN CHAPTER 8 TOO BUT THEN I STARTED TO GET UNCINFUSED.(IF RAPE THEN NOT RAPE THEN) I A SLOW ONE SO DON'T THINK IT WAS REALLY CONFUSING. WELL WRITE MORE SOON!!!! IT'S SOOO GOOD!!!!
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Title: love it ^_^
Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! i love it i love it i love it! i just can get enough of strong kagome (prolly why i wrote about it ne?)...anywho please update soon, and i noticed that you asked alot about spelling and stuff, so if you want you can ask me, im pretty good at that stuff. ^_^ lol. i love the fic, please update....please?
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Reviewed By: inuyuyurrk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 07:09 CST
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PLZZ UPDATE!!!
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Title: Hiei
Reviewed By: Lizardbreth On: February 04, 2004 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei/Kag plz and i like your fic
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 15:45 CST
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Hey i love this story and i cant ait to see what happends next so you have to update soon ok tootles
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Reviewed By: black kaze Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 17:35 CST
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Reviewed By: black kaze Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 17:35 CST
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Reviewed By: black kaze Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ sweeeeet... *pouts* can't say i like the fricken idiotic computer text watevers in there but... ^^ its worth ta look at if i cn continue ta read this excellent story....
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:41 CST
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dam her mom is such a bitch i hate her well update really soon ok tootles
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: January 04, 2004 22:15 CST
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LOVE the stroy and i think that Kagome should be with Hiei ok well update realy soon ok tootles
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: January 04, 2004 07:15 CST
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INUYASHA HUKER UP WHITH INUYASHA AND MAKE INUYASHA THAKE HER TO THE OFFIS SORRY I JUST LOVE THE HOLE INU KAG THING BUT PLESE PLSES PLESE MAKE IT INU KAG PARING I KNOW ITS OLD BUT A LOT OF US OUT HERE LIKE THAT OLD STUBREN WHOS THE DOMANIT ONE AND WHOS THE INFERER ONE AND THE CASICK BOY PISSES GIRL OFF , GIRL LEAVS BOY , BOY FINDS GIRL , BEGGS FOR FORGIVNES , GIRL EXEPTS AND LETS THROW THE POWER OF A ROSARY IN THAR AND WELA INSTANT COMADY ROMANS AND ADVENCHER STORY ALL IN ONE . IN MY OPENYON THAT IS ONE OF THE BEST TYPE OF STORYS THAR ARE .
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: January 02, 2004 03:22 CST
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whaaaaaaaaa so evil stupid cliffhangas sniff plz sniff write more sniff!!!!!!!!and i want kag wit hiei da challenge ya noe?!?!
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Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 03:15 CST
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well, i love kag/kur parings so i pick that. i LOVE the story BTW. i think its great update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 21:05 CST
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this stroy is really good you have to update son ok tootles
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Reviewed By: Dark Demonic Moon Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a great story! Kag/Hiei plz! There aern't many out there and its my fav pairing.
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: December 30, 2003 19:59 CST
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whaaaaaaaaa thats soo sad!! stupid some1 hehe um i wanted it it be hiei/kag whaaaaaaaaaa sniffsniff plz write more
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: December 28, 2003 01:31 CST
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whaaaaaaaaa thats sooo sad!!!!! i hate kagomes mom!! *sniff**sniff* plz *sniff* write mroe!!?? *sniff*
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Title: Sorry about that.
Reviewed By: Queen_of_Blades [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 20:01 CST
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Wellllllllllll actually. I dont have word. AND I HATE IT!! On my regular computer, I have to use notepad, because my dad rebuilt it and didn't put word back on. And my laptop is a mac. Sooo sorry about that... I dont know how to fix it.... *Looks at the screen with blank expression, then calls dad in.* HELP! Queen_of_Blades p.s. It feels weird posting a review on my story lol!
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I read the two chapters, they're really good! What did Yusuke and Kagome do together? Like were they spirit detactives together? I wanna know! Plus, can this be a kur/kag fic? I love that pairing! :) One other thing. Do you have Word? If you do, next time save your work as a html. Cuz at the beginning and end of your story theres this "Computer language" crap. It's wasted space, so just save your work as a html (just add ".html" to the end of the document.) and it'll look alot better! :) ~Rosie13 (ps i put a new chapter up!)
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