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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW
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Title: CONTINUE!!!!!
Reviewed By: YASHAGRL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: chapter 5 review
Reviewed By: Kagome3007(not logged in) On: March 26, 2004 21:59 CST
Comment/Review:
cool! =^_^= question: does suru mean sly? you hinted about that in your author's note. does it mean sly fox? I looked it up, and it doesn't... so... hmm... I'm sticking with my earlier guess... bai!
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Title: up to chapter 4 review
Reviewed By: Kagome3007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
suru=to do; to try; to play; to practice; to cost; to serve as; to pass; to elapse; to print; to rub; to chafe; to file; to frost (glass); to strike (match); to shave; to pick someone's pocket. those are all the definitions that I've found. But I bet that you want 'to serve as'. And by the way, I doubt that Kagome would have been writing in kanji, especially since you want to split it up and change it. she might be writing in hiragana or katakana. all three are forms of kana. Is that what you meant? Kana? Kanji is one character per word. anyway... thanks for reviewing my fanfic, Lani. bai!
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Reviewed By: Dragonessa On: March 21, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. I think you did a good job at making it actually different from Spirited Away, but keep the same story line. I could'nt do that without it sounding wierd. I'm impressed
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. You have great taste in movies and t.v. shows. I love Haku can you please send me a picture of Haku and Update soon. My e-mail address is Abigailme2001@yahoo.com and can you give me some points on writing a story cause i am writing one soon.
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Reviewed By: Kourime Fire Kitsune Dog Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 16:04 CST
Comment/Review:
good story. Continue plz........*Makes a childish face* You must continue this story!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: amanda01 On: January 14, 2004 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you still did'nt answer me are there any pairings!!
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Title: soul of a dragon
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 14:05 CST
Comment/Review:
that was a cool chapter I liked it:D
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Dragon_Shaddow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is getting really good! Oh, and, than kyou SO much for reviewing my story! *really happy now*^_^ Anyway, just for the records, I LOVE HAKU!!!! YAY!!^_^ His real name is Nigihyami Kohakunushi, or just Kohaku, by the way.
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: December 30, 2003 08:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Who is the pairing?! Haku and Kagome I guess, but I'm not sure. I think Suru means: to serve as or to rub; to chafe; to file
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 03:35 CST
Comment/Review:
that was great...i love spirited away...i love haku and i like fox...ahhh hell i like it all:)
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in( On: December 29, 2003 16:29 CST
Comment/Review:
hahahahahaha a * snickers * carrot spirit hahahahahahahahahaha update really soon
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: December 29, 2003 01:44 CST
Comment/Review:
lol chocolate please update soon
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 00:48 CST
Comment/Review:
SWEET I loved spirited away...and i just love HAKU:D can't wait to see the rest of this:D
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