| "Terrible Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Very nice story
Reviewed By: Sakia Ishida On: August 18, 2004 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey.... I'm writing a ygo fanfic on the same topic with anzu bashing too ^_~.... a very good story haha... too bad the names of the two girls in my story is different...muhahaha..and mine is a crossover from hp.. haha hope I get as many reviews as u...ala in all a very nice story hope u update soon and good luck!!!
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Title: Attack of the Mary-Sues
Reviewed By: FlamingChickenFromOuterspace On: July 07, 2004 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaah!, horrible twisted selfinserted mary-sues!. Run for your lifes!. Otherwise really nice. But i honestly think its a bit unbelievable that two girls knockout yami and 2 big fat bullies without a bead of sweat. So hear the calling of the blood and tuck away those fucking mary sues. And keep up the good work!.
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: January 07, 2004 18:06 CST
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OO! Yuri! You don't see too much of that! When's Tea coming in *shudder*? Are you gonna have her run over by cars and stuff? That's always a good classic Tea moment! *laughs insanely*
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: January 07, 2004 16:07 CST
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OMG! I can't wait to find out what Grandpa wants! Alas, Bakura was on TV and I got distracted and the wife wants the computer.
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: January 06, 2004 20:13 CST
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why's grandpa crying? i wanna know, but i have to read later.
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: December 27, 2003 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze update. this is really good.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Ricky On: December 27, 2003 15:27 CST
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Your story is all right to me so if you have some time on your hands continue writing your fic.
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