"Robotic Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 14:27 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the title. It's really cool. *glares at POB* What does POB mean anyway...? I really like your story... as I just said... I just felt like reviewing again! And Kikyou...? She is just weird like that. I suppose that she is both a very nice woman and a spoiled icy bitch... depends on which lifetime you are talking about.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 14:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my gosh, that was so so so so so so good. Now update.
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Reviewed By: small fry 16 On: July 19, 2004 02:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: i have to say that i did really hate it,the story itself was Ok,except for the fact that you incorrectly ripped off sleeping beauty. I guess the thing i really hated was the fact that kikyo was portrayed as this spoiled ice queen and kagome this sweet angel when it's really the other way around,i think that if you are going to rip off slepping beauty at least do it right....princess aurora wasn't spoiled and cold and neither is kikyo....so bite me
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Reviewed By: Lifeless_Kanna On: July 17, 2004 12:17 CDT Comment/Review: YAY! I traveled from ff.net to mm.org. -Cheerz- U posted it at two sites ne? ^-^ and I like the title just fine the way it is.. >.< -glares at pob- bwaahahhahaha.. im so evil. -ahem- update asap please. ^-^
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 12:51 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story!!!!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 01:49 CDT Comment/Review: oooo. i like this one. i have to admit at first i found it a little weird that they took a human Kag and made her into a robot. i have so many questions about her anatomy because i'm not sure i quite understand how the whole human to robot thing works, but then again, i suppose that's the point. are they going to change her back to human later? can they do that? and is Sess going to brake off his engagment to kagura so he can marry Rin? as odd and unlikelly as the two are, i love them. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: elementalspirit125 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 16:40 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Best story I've read in a long time. Kudos to you and your wonderful story-writing abilities. Continue, and I'll be reading right there behind every chapter.
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Title: luv it so far Reviewed By: EviLAngeLOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 20:00 CDT Comment/Review: me likey very much... that said id like even more to see the end. i despise kikyo with a firey passion & i hope she rots in hell, but i luv ur fic!
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Reviewed By: demonwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 16:06 CDT Comment/Review: damn kikyou is a stupid ass bitch...i think i just insulted my dog...anyways, you got a good story so far and update soon i wanna see where you're going with this.
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Reviewed By: POB not logged in On: April 24, 2004 13:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Just read your second chapter. Please update soon, your doing a great job this is a very unique story. Princess Of Boredom
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Reviewed By: POB not logged in On: April 23, 2004 20:03 CDT Comment/Review: It's pretty good so far. But may I make a slight suggestion, you might get more viewers and reviewers if you change the title. But anyways if you don't want to it's your decision, keep up the good work.
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