| "THE TRUE Pan and 17 STORY" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Ghettogurl123 On: September 27, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh that was really good and I really want a lemon so update real soon
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Title: NNNOOOO!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you?! That was one of the Meanest cliffies I have ever had to go through. So, update soon. Peace Out, Sakag
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Reviewed By: Jessica spellman On: July 13, 2005 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey its kewl take your time i can wait for a good pan 17 fic. but its only cause this is like one of the only ones..hehe.. its also a good fic and yes please a little lemon never hurt anyone so i hope to see it in the next few chapters
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Title: THE TRUE Pan and 17 STORY
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 13, 2005 17:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow i;m glad that you did update it's been a while and i really like this story very much...so please don't wait long to update this time..
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Reviewed By: Curtis Zidane Ziraa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh, interesting. Hey, when did you update this last? Oh well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: frozen_in_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! YOU CAN NOT STOP!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE MORE
Reviewed By: frozen_in_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheesh, you really gave up on this story havn't yah??? I really wanna read the rest!! I got to the last chapter and i was like "oh that's bull!" and so now i really want you to update!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeease!
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Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 18:44 CST
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Hello, you've got problems.Quit hurting Vegeta he's my friend and if you keep hurting him I'll kill many random people and blame it on Goku.Why do I have a feeling that you don't care?Well I love your fanfic but can you put a little more comedy or I'll kill you and blame it on Goku.Well gota go I meed to kill my doctor for prescribing me steroids before my nap(I know you think I'm undre 6 years old I don't know why people think that but I'm 13 and I'm turning 14 soon dammit I'm not 6)then I'm gonna thank him.Evil me what are you doin' here and knobody asked you what you'll do.Sorry my evil side took over but I gotta go.Shut up girl or I'll kil you.You try and I'll take sleeping pills.Don't you dare good me.Then leave me alone.Fine.Gotta go bye bye(^_^)
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Reviewed By: kittystar On: December 29, 2003 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed the chapter please update.
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