| "Surrender To My Love" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: hey, pretzel girl!!!
Reviewed By: dragonqueen/kt On: October 30, 2004 23:50 CDT
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HI chelsea!!!! see, i finally found your stories! turns out i just didn't go far enough back to find yours. :D well, just thought i'd say hi. and since its what i'm supposed to be doing, i may as well tell you that i like your stories... even if they are kinda....yeah... well, i have to get offline before my dad finds me. after all, it is 11:50 p.m. well, buh-bye!!! dragonqueen/kt
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kewl!! I can't wait to see another chapter! (especially the love making)
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 10:06 CST
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Hee, hee... I like this fic... Is there a Major plot brewing in the background or is this all? Heh heh, a writers ways are mysterious as well as scary. ^_^
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 16:16 CST
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i am really sry about my chapter 7 missing i dont know when it will be up-_-
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 22:12 CST
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Another two awesome chapters! Ooh... Yugi is soooo... Not innocent... How could Yami have never noticed?! Crazy! Can't wait for the next chapters, yo! And will Bakura and Malik come out again? Is Bakura really that much of a jerk? Oh, no! What about Ryou?! Is he going to stay over a Yugi's house?!
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Title: Yup. Bakura is a jerk and all
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 23:57 CST
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Cool fic so far! I like! I like! I wonder who's visiting Yami? In the car I mean... It's Bakura isn't it? Isn't it!?! Oh! I bet it is! Come to beg forgiveness? Naw. That's un-Bakura like. Come to cum? Yeah, that's the one, ne! Heh! Don't keep us waiting to long now! Give us the next chapter as soon as possible, yo!
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Reviewed By: millenniumshadow On: January 24, 2004 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... was Bakura really drunk? I mean, poor Yami! You have to update. And also, is Seto the one who came inside Yami's house/apartment? i hope it is ^_^ Please update!
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Reviewed By: sayu On: January 17, 2004 18:35 CST
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Poor Yami... its a great story please continue! i wanna no wut happens next.
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Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh RA!!!! Poor Yami!!!. I actually got teary eyed when I read the last chapter. Please continue, it's really really really good.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Poor Yami... and poor Tea. I swear! People act like she is the only one making friendship speeches! Have you watched the show lately? Yugi/Yami is the worst! Where is my friends? I have to save my friends. Joey I believe in you. Yugi I believe in you too. But I'm getting off topic. You dirty girl! Your so mean to Yami. Marik and Malik live in an apartment? But his sis is rich...
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey cool fic. i was wondering if we were going to see that pairing any time soon. ^_^ please keep going
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