| "White Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Ardwynna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this one a lot! I thought the interrogation scene in the third chapter was a bit too spare for it to really come to life, but overall, this fic's a pretty neat piece of work.
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Reviewed By: sava On: June 07, 2004 22:31 CDT
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i'm hooked!! you gotta write more I have to know what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 14:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good... Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi On: May 24, 2004 15:29 CDT
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I love this fic. UPDATE! UPDATE~!~~~
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Reviewed By: Kara Angitia On: March 22, 2004 02:51 CST
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[smiles]I liked this, and its nice that Watari has a partner (fianlly)keep up the good work..... are we going to see Omi? [looks hopeful]
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Reviewed By: Ice'is Blue On: February 20, 2004 21:32 CST
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I've never been one much for Yohji/Brad, but this is a very interesting beginning, and I'll probably keep reading despite the pairing. I'm curious if Yohji was involved romantically with anyone immediately before his death. Ken's been ruled out, but what of Aya and Omi? With this new case, I hope we get a peek into the remains of Weiss and see how the kitties are handling the loss of one of their own. ^_^; *swears she's not evil*
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Reviewed By: Daea On: February 10, 2004 22:17 CST
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*squees upon noting update, then, noting what she was doing, attempts to regain composure* Ehem.. I think that is about all the response I'm going to dow right now.. *trods off to bed*
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Reviewed By: Nuriko Sama On: January 20, 2004 02:50 CST
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So far, so good. but what now? don't say you've given up on this fic????!!!! glares angrily, I wan't to see what comes next.
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Reviewed By: Sahel On: January 12, 2004 08:39 CST
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So far it can be the begin of an interesting fiction.
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Reviewed By: Bahar On: January 06, 2004 12:00 CST
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It looks like a promising fic , that is if you ever going to update!
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Reviewed By: Daea On: January 04, 2004 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Intriguing... and very cruel of you to just post that *prod* looking for more~ Crossovers are always fun *nod* especially employing two of my favorite anime.
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Reviewed By: Johee On: January 03, 2004 12:36 CST
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It started nice, could turn out becoming a very intresting fic.
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