| "And peace on earth" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this *sniffle* chap made me want to cry. i love it and am sad that you said in one more chapter that it the fic will be over. i love how Zech was referred to an angel too. and how Trieze is feeling a little neglected. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chap 3 was just too funny. Heero and Wufei snuggling? then scaring Duo? priceless. i love it!!! off to the fourth chap!! hasta luego!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! second chapter was funny as well as sweet. i'm off to read chap 3!!! *skips happily to grab a cup of hot chocolate then goes back to the monitor* so Trieze is jealous of Duo? interesting indeed. are you gonna pair Duo with anyone? of course i should ask this after i'm completely caught up with everything. silly me. well ja matte ne!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 1 was great!!! i love how zech and trieze took care of duo even though they were enemies. now i'm off to read chapter 2. i'll be back!!!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 12, 2004 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope in the next chapter the pilots find out what Duo went through...And feel bad about not looking for him sooner..
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Title: *Squee!*
Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: September 21, 2004 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You reviewed a fic of mine, which led me here. I'm so glad it did. I really enjoyed reading this (although now I'm going to be late for work this morning). You've got a solid understanding of how to rope a reader in with your story ... hope you are writing more of this fic.
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Reviewed By: Keiran [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very fun. ^__^ Slightly lower marks for the 'Spelling and Grammar' but don't worry about that. Some caught my eye, but not enought to hinder the overall flow. Full marks for Originality, it's not often that you see a blanket fic without someone feeling the desperate need to get laid. ^_^ Even less where a *couple* finds a half-frozen individual and doesn't pull them to their bed. I very much enjoyed the 6/13/2 exchanges, am eagerly awaiting Duo being proved wrong about Wufei's reasons for avenging people. 1+2+5 are adorable, when written right. Hm. I hope you won't give up on the story - it's too much fun. Write on! Hugs.
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Reviewed By: atalante On: March 31, 2004 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's the first fic i review on this site... i so love your storm... and i can't wait to see what will happen when the gundam pilots come into treize's castle. please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Keita On: March 28, 2004 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked! I found the second part posted on DnD, and decided to go on a manhunt for the first. And here I am. As strange as the premise may be, you've managed to keep them both in character, good job. :oD
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