Reviewed By: VickiLe On: August 13, 2005 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first person thing is really confusing. I really think that if you re-wrote this in 3rd person, instead of 1st, it'd be a lot less confusing. I guess the first person thing for me, is just strange, using the I's, it's kinda like I'm actually the person (Sasuke or Naruto)so it's kinda scary. When used correctly (first person stories) it's absoultely amazing, but here it's just weird....
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