| "Stuck between Wolf Fur and Prayer Beads" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Kouga/Sango
Reviewed By: Inukochan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 07:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must vote for Kouga/Sango, I love the pairing! Then again, I love almost anything with Kouga in it. ^_^ Please continue writing, it's very good so far but I must say that I am disappointed that I couldn't keep reading as the next chapter has yet to be posted. ;.; I noticed a few spelling and/or grammar errors, such as the part "Shippo and Kirara yawned and sighed tiredly when they realized what or more precisely what had caused the outburst." I understood what you meant but it seems as though 'who' would be more appropriate here. I've made the same mistake in many of my writings as well. ^^; I only suggest that you try and keep an eye out for those sorts of things. But nonetheless, it was very good and certainly look forward to reading more of it. ~Inukochan~
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Title: Kouga/Sango
Reviewed By: Inukochan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 07:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must vote for Kouga/Sango, I love the pairing! Then again, I love almost anything with Kouga in it. ^_^ Please continue writing, it's very good so far but I must say that I am disappointed that I couldn't keep reading as the next chapter has yet to be posted. ;.; I noticed a few spelling and/or grammar errors, such as the part "Shippo and Kirara yawned and sighed tiredly when they realized what or more precisely what had caused the outburst." I understood what you meant but it seems as though 'who' would be more appropriate here. I've made the same mistake in many of my writings as well. ^^; I only suggest that you try and keep an eye out for those sorts of things. But nonetheless, it was very good and certainly look forward to reading more of it. ~Inukochan~
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Reviewed By: FrustratedPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I vote for Kouga/Sango; there are too few fics about this pair. On a sidenote, the prayer beads could also symbolically represent Inu Yasha; now wouldn't that be an interesting twist having Inu Yasha and Kouga fighting over Sango rather than Kagome?
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Reviewed By: Winged Heart On: September 13, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kouga Kouga Kouga Kouga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Sango Sango Sango Sango!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Incase you dont catch what i'm trying to say make it a Kouga/Sango fic PLEASE! ^-^
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Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic!! i agree with Chinina-chan, there isn't enough story to pick a pairing yet. but if it were a life or death situation, i would have to vote for sango/kouga. because you are so right, there aren't alot(i dunno even know if there is one) of kouga/sango fics out there. so it would be an original idea!! and who doesn't love the wolf demon his blue eyes *drools* and his tail!!! omg his tail is so cute!! whoa..!!! sorry!! where did that come from? but don't get me wrong, miroku is FINE too. but well enough said!! ne wayz i hope u update soon, and that it turns out to be a sango/kouga pairing!!!
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Reviewed By: Chinina-chan On: December 28, 2003 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u're fic iz good so far but there aren't enough chapters 2 really tell.
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