| "Flickering Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 21:23 CST
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OK I just read your ENTIRE story Plus ALL of the alternate endings and let me tell you that you created a wonderful story....XD.............but I don't ever suggest anyone try to read four alternate ending is a row .....cause it can get really confusing.....*few* (head ack)......Ya know Kagome said that she wasn't a virgin when she when to Koenma's office the first time for the sword, but In two of the alternate ending it was CLEARLY stated that she was a virgin.....so what's up with that, its probably cause I read it all at once but o-well....during the whole time I was reading this I was wandering how you where going to get Kagome and Hiei back together cause I saw that you had an alternate ending for them when I started reading, personally I don't know how she could for give them but hay its not my problem, I wander what he would have done if he had actually killed her he wouldn't even had a chance to apologize, which reminds me (it really doesn't have to do with what I just said buy hay) How come Kagome got that Information form that guy to go to the Sunset Shrine and they never when hu? Its like you lost your train of though or like a chapter was missing of some thing....o-well I guess the story came out all good any ways, thank you for writing it...........................................................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 22:49 CST
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wow! great story. i would vote too but I just found this story. I liked all the alternating endings. LATERZ
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Title: uhm..review!
Reviewed By: Iwantkoga [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im only on ch.2 but i hope itsa sesshomaru/kagome fic. PLEASE let it be a sesshy/kag fic *gets down on knees* PLEASSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 16:13 CST
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That...Kuronue...ending was so sweet! I loved it!
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Title: confustion
Reviewed By: fox they trixter On: May 15, 2004 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its not confuzing although it took me 14 times to get it sorry about the mix up....:)
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Title: confustion
Reviewed By: fox they trixter On: May 15, 2004 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its kind of cofuzing she has 5 or 4 mates sess kurama heia personaly i would pick heia but thats just me well the fanfictions is just confuzing
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Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love all four endings. You made each one different and made it unique for each story. Keep writing, love the way you write fics.
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Reviewed By: shadowslayerprincess(not logged in) On: April 10, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Their all perfect! I love them!
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Reviewed By: yoko's-mate On: April 06, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW just well WOW! This is my favorite fan fic i am kind of sad that it's done 'cuz now i wont have any new chapters to look forward to but the ending is awsome! I like the Hiei/Kagome ending best the two forbiden children are alone no longer how romantic lol! I loved it i hope you write a new fan fic soon i luv your writing ja ne!
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Reviewed By: GONLOVER123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN"T PUT HIEI WITH KAGOME U HAVE TO DO SESSHOMARU
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Title: NO HIEI
Reviewed By: kuramalover3000 On: April 01, 2004 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAIJOBU!!!! are you insane you lonatic hiei just betrayed her and you want to still pair her with him hell no don't do it. i'll take to japan with me on saturday if you don't. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAA AAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII PLEASE DON"T DO IT. JA'ne p.s. eiter kag/jin kag/sess kag/yoko/kur or kag/kurone
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Title: NO HIEI
Reviewed By: kuramalover3000 On: April 01, 2004 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAIJOBU!!!! are you insane you lonatic hiei just betrayed her and you want to still pair her with him hell no don't do it. i'll take to japan with me on saturday if you don't. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAA AAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII PLEASE DON"T DO IT. JA'ne
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000(not loged in) On: March 28, 2004 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ME LIKE ME LIKE KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP IT UP K
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Title: Flickering Flames
Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 27, 2004 00:44 CST
Comment/Review:
You did a wonderful job. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki*not logged in! On: March 26, 2004 15:17 CST
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loved the chapter!
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