| "Family By Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: Draza On: October 18, 2004 18:28 CDT
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hey DD and YD!!! this story is awsome!!! and of course lexi's little out burts with pee-nize (spell?) was hilarious, especially with seto. lol, i couldn't stop laughing!!! i have a quick question though, when are you going to update soulmates? i really wanna read the rest of it!!! Please? *puppy dog eyes* i'll give you a cookie.....
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 15:42 CDT
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Keep updating, the suspence is killing me lol
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Reviewed By: ---,--LadyGrey--'--{@ On: September 24, 2004 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh great Ra, You're BACK!!! I'm so happy! Welcome back DD, hope things are going better for you, and hope we can look forward to MANY, MANY more updates like this one soon! Oh, and "scrawny, pharonic ass" -- priceless. Gotta run, sorry it's short but I really am glad to see you're back. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Ainetaekon On: September 23, 2004 11:54 CDT
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You Updatedddddddddddddddddddd great chapter hun, hope you are well keep going and how long is this story going to be? anyway talk to you soon Laura
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 16:40 CDT
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Weeehaaa!! Back with a bang!! Oh man!! More please and soon!!!
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 21:17 CDT
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yay! Finally a Dan ass-kicking!!! *donates Millenium Backscratcher for the cause*
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 20:13 CDT
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I love this story. Otogi needs to remember what his grandpa said. The guy knows a lot. He may be cryptic at times but he knows what he is talking about. Hope we see something about hot Mokuba is doing soon. Poor little guy. (Oh crap I just remembered I`m getting older again.)
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Reviewed By: Not signed in Yanagi On: September 18, 2004 18:55 CDT
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Still as good as ever. Can I have a stab at Dan? Please? I just know Bakura has something *good* in store for him. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 20:05 CDT
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I really enjoy reading this story and all your other ones as well. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: I Is Me On: August 30, 2004 20:02 CDT
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Are we implying somthing... off going on between a certain CEO and child, or something wrong w/ Mo?
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 23:05 CDT
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Tell me you are not setting Mokuba up for flashbacks of what happened. Also tell me that he is not going to think that it was Seto instead of Gozaboro. From your other stories, this is the feeling I am getting and that would not be good. Tris and Otogi need smacked up the side of the head. If those two could be any more clueless about the others feelings I think that I would consider them twits. As it is the are just bull-headed J**ka**es that need to get it together. Sorry about the*** I don`t like to cuss in front of the kids and my little one asks too many questions as is. Love your story though, it will keep me coming back time and time again.
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Reviewed By: Nicolette On: August 14, 2004 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a word?....Awesome! I really enjoy all of your stories, but this series is my favorite. I love the way you have developed these characters, showing their strengths and flaws. How the horrible things that happen to them may shake their faith but ultimately strengthens their unique bond. Those poor boys can't seem to catch a break can they? Well anyway you are a fantastic writer and I can't wait for the next installment of Family By Coice and Dead End Street.
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Reviewed By: Ladybard96 On: August 13, 2004 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn. You've written one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. Please update!
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Title: ch 21
Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 18:19 CDT
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I love the story but what happened at the end of chapter 21 it just stops right before the Flash back. I would really like to now what happens. As for chapter 22 excelent as usual I love the interaction between Bakura and Lexi it is hillarious.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 07:03 CDT
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What does Mokuba think is wrong with Seto?? Loved the Lexie and Bakura scene, very funny.
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