| "Family By Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Forlorn Dragon On: April 19, 2004 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just keep getting better and better. I really want seto and mokuba to get back together though. I would also like to see a seto yami and yugi lemon. There is to much tris and seto.
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Reviewed By: cutekittyangel111 On: April 16, 2004 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... aren't Seto, Yami and Yugi married? If so, why aren't there any lemons or fluff about them? It seems like Seto and Tristan are married... I hope this fic doen't turn into Dead End Street... please? Anyway, everything else is good
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 08:01 CDT
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The plot just gets more and more complicated. Hopefully there will be a little Seto/Yami/Yugi action. Haven't seen too much of especially Yami lately.
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Title: Lemons
Reviewed By: shadow-spiritofdoom On: April 10, 2004 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should have a Seto/Yami lemon without Yugi, you haven't written one of those for a long time. But still... *snickers* Mako... a policeman! Didn't see that one coming. Lexi's easier to understand now, after... what, ten chapters? But it's fun reading what she says ^_^ update really soon... you're so suspenseful, in a good way! ^_^
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Lexi wasn't kidnapped!!! She's so cute! I love Mako! Glad you put him in there. Will we be seeing more of him? *winks*
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Reviewed By: purkle dragon goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 20:02 CDT
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You should have let Bakura kill her, but nice working out of the situation...for now, I've read you too much to know that's the end of her. And the whole Bakura/Lexi scene was too much, I was almost in tears!
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Title: WHAT!
Reviewed By: ForlornDragon On: April 01, 2004 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great, no, AWSOMWE fic. I just can't belive some of the things you do. It's driving me crazy. Keep writing or else!
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Reviewed By: purkle dragon goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! That was just terrible (not the story but those evil, evil people!). Can't wait to see how the guys deal with this.
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Title: actually from your wife.
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup...you are dead. Sooooooooooo dead. But that's okay! I can get Bakura down 26 flights of stairs!! Strip him, cover him in chocolate sauce. Strip Ryou, cover him with chocolate sauce...then Bakura can ride Ryou down the flights of stairs.... with sexy results!!!!!!!!!!!! OH YEAH! *drools*
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Title: Eep!
Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! Lexi got a kitty!!!! *holds the furball* Poor, poor Otogi!!! He's one of my fave characters! *hugs the poor thing* I'll love you baby!
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Reviewed By: mathehobbit On: March 28, 2004 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I read your guys other one, Stronger Than Before, and loved it. I thought it was friggin amazing. I love joey to death, and him and Tristan are so cute together! And...hell, I just really loved it! Please finish it! I beg you!
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Reviewed By: Slayr77 On: March 23, 2004 08:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very good fic, better then one of mine, but it is starting to sound like a soap opera. (Hurriedly types) not that there bad or anything. Plz, plz, pllllllllzzzzzzzzzz continue writing and get the next chappie up pwitty pwitty pweezze
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 11:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Ootogi! Looks like another threesom is in the future. Hoping for some Seto/Yugi/Yami action soon. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 23:02 CST
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I'll never think of maple syrup in the same light again. Wonder how the Seto /Mokuba problem will be resolved?
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Title: gr8
Reviewed By: supernerd On: March 06, 2004 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story. i like the relationship between mokuba and roger. plz continue^^
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