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Reviewed By: Ladybard96 On: August 13, 2004 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn. You've written one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. Please update!
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Title: ch 21
Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 18:19 CDT
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I love the story but what happened at the end of chapter 21 it just stops right before the Flash back. I would really like to now what happens. As for chapter 22 excelent as usual I love the interaction between Bakura and Lexi it is hillarious.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 07:03 CDT
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What does Mokuba think is wrong with Seto?? Loved the Lexie and Bakura scene, very funny.
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Title: Oh my GOD!!!
Reviewed By: special with a Q On: August 10, 2004 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was so funny when Lexi discovered "Ba-ra and Ree's pee-niz". I was cracking up! That was weird with Seto touching Matthew weird. I hope that's not the case with him. Is it from being around Gabozuro? (I think that's how you spell it) Don't make Seto a PERVERT!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:10 CDT
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Wow!! When you guys say everything, you mean it!! Lords! Whatta chappie! What the hell is Mokuba thinking???? Where is he piloting that course from? Damn! And the fights, an Lexi and Ba'ra was tooo funny!!!! Oh man!! You guys gotta update soon. Ok??
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Reviewed By: Shadowfax01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 13:45 CDT
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~*~*~*~*~ FLASHBACK ~*~*~*~*~ and I loved it."... d touched Tristan'e rules. ke the chance. I don't quite understand...first i thought it was just my computer, but then i reloaded, and then i waited a couple of days and tried again...and still i can't read the end of your chapter...so far so good though...can't wait for the next installment. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 22:07 CDT
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Yay! I loved it! It was even better when I could read the end of it!!! Poor Nathan... *hands him straight man stuff*
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 08:19 CDT
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Another excellant chapter! So happy that Seto and Yugi have made up and that Yami will be returning soon. What evil plans do you have for poor Tristan?
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 00:52 CDT
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"and I loved it."... d touched Tristan'e rules. ke the chance." ------------------------------------------------- This confuses me...
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Reviewed By: Forlorn Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 08:51 CDT
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Once again you pull off a great chapter. Keep it up. I can't get enough of this fic.
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Reviewed By: Laura-Anne On: June 21, 2004 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i am hooked, i hope that you update soon. When is Tris going come to his senses about Otogi? Can't belive that neither Yami or Yugi where not there when Matthew said "dada" for the first time to Seto. im just glad that Yugi came to his sense before it was too late and i am soooooo glad that Bakura killed that little feck that shot Mokuba. anyway thanks for a great story and great chapter. E-mail me Anime_gurl@02.ie. thanks Laura
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 07:52 CDT
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Wonderful chapter! You did an excellant job showing Seto's heartbreaking,rollercoaster of emotions and Tristan's difficulties in helping him. The dialog between Otogi and Justin was very cute. Glad Yugi came to senses. Hopefully Yami will be back soon.
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Title: gbhj,
Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 19:48 CDT
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You're evil.... You know that, right?
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Reviewed By: purkledragongoddess On: June 12, 2004 17:36 CDT
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WOW that was one hell of an emotional rollercoaster now wasn't it. Think I have to go figure out just how I feel now, damn.
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: June 10, 2004 19:41 CDT
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Mmm...lemon. Otogi needs a good kick in the teeth. Seto, Yami, and Yugi need a nice THREEWAY *cough cough* Bakura needs to ditch the clothing. I'm going to pass a law making it illegal for my boy to wear clothing! *passes law* WOOHOO! Seto needs some Tristan love. Tristan needs good Otogi love. Roger and Mokuba need to be squished to death. *SQUISH* RYou needs a cuddle. *cuddles Ryou* *hands Lexi plushie* NEED LEMON!
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