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Reviewed By: your wife On: May 19, 2004 15:03 CDT
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That was a kick-ass chappie. Damn, Tristan! Poor Ryou. I'd love to see that sight..Bakura pounding into Ryou...*needs nap* Tristan: I'm too sexy for my coffee! Bakura: I'm too sexy to review! Otogi: I'm too sexy for my dice! Ryou: I'm too sexy for my yami! Seto: I'm too sexy...PERIOD! Marik: I'm too sexy for my Rod! Malik: O.O THAT'S MY LINE!!!!! Bakurasgirl: *rolls eyes* Lexi: *holds cats* I'm too.... Joey: LEXI, NO!
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 15, 2004 00:30 CDT
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I just found this fic. It took me 2 and a half hours to read. I couldn`t stop once I started. I can`t wait until the next chapter is finished. I love Bakura in this. The whole melting over his niece is sooo cute. And he is still the same annoying bloodthirsty guy we know and love. I hope that guy that is after them gets Bakura`s form of vengence. Just a thought. Thanks for the fic. xxoo for the authors.
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 00:08 CDT
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Great chapter! Loved the blood-drunk Bakura and Justin's story about Yugi kissing Seto's "hurt" penis was priceless. The conflict between Yugi and Seto will lead to lots of angst. Don't leave poor Yami in the puzzle too long!
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Reviewed By: purkledragongoddess On: May 10, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the blood! YES! Oh what next...love when Tris and Seto walked in on Bakura and Ryou LOL and the whole scene between Tris and Otogi and Justin's story (gotta love kids!)
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Reviewed By: your wife On: May 03, 2004 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmm....lime.....gotta love Tris / Joey. Too good. Now....for my reaction to Mokuba...O.O.... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! MO-KU-BA! *sighs* got that off my chest. in speaking of chest...*covers Bakura's chest in blueberry wine* mmmmmmmmmmmm..........wine-covered yami.
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Reviewed By: purkle dragon goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 09:29 CDT
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yeah Bakura gets to kill someone! I've been waiting for that. Nice touch getting Seto to get over the fact Roger loved Mokuba also.
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Title: Why?
Reviewed By: ForlornDragon On: April 28, 2004 17:48 CDT
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Why do you do this to us? Mr. and Mrs. taylor should die. But I guess that would take away from alot of the story. Your writing is great. You really capture the feelings of the characters.
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: April 26, 2004 11:13 CDT
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OMG NOOO!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!! PLEASE LET MOKIE BE OKAY!!!!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:14 CDT
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*grrs at Anna Coleman* MOKUBA!!!! NOOOOOO!!!! YOU IS EVILNESS INCARNATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: purkle dragon goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 21:42 CDT
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:screams!: what did you do to Mokuba!?! Okay that's out of the way...obviously this will get everything back to normal between the two brothers, but do you have to scare us like that?
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Reviewed By: dragondreamer's wife On: April 24, 2004 18:00 CDT
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My wife does not write in script format. Just her cast commentary is in script format. So, to the specific person in question, you may actually want to READ the fic before you decide to throw in your nonsense.
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Title: family by choice
Reviewed By: Anna Coleman On: April 22, 2004 18:11 CDT
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I want to read a story, not a script. You need to work on your writing style.
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Forlorn Dragon On: April 19, 2004 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just keep getting better and better. I really want seto and mokuba to get back together though. I would also like to see a seto yami and yugi lemon. There is to much tris and seto.
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Reviewed By: cutekittyangel111 On: April 16, 2004 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... aren't Seto, Yami and Yugi married? If so, why aren't there any lemons or fluff about them? It seems like Seto and Tristan are married... I hope this fic doen't turn into Dead End Street... please? Anyway, everything else is good
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 08:01 CDT
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The plot just gets more and more complicated. Hopefully there will be a little Seto/Yami/Yugi action. Haven't seen too much of especially Yami lately.
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