| "Faraway in Ancient Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iteresting but kind of confusing, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 00:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting! Original plot. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: millenniumspirit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi! I've revised chapter 4, the one with Seto/Yami, so there is no more Seto/Yami. Sorry about that, I mixed up a part of my other fic with this one... oops! Please don't get mad, and I am VERY SORRY TO EVERYONE WHO WANTED TO YELL AT ME... THANKS LADY ASIA FOR POINTING THAT OUT! I usually don't read the chapters that I upload... Yami: *whacks ms on the head* It's your own fault You can now read the revised chapter 4! Enjoy!
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Title: THANK YOU!!
Reviewed By: sands_of_shadows On: February 08, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you soooooooo much! I thought that this fic would have been a Seto/Yami fic! Whew! I likie so far... The book burps?! hehe. I like it when Yami and Yami Bakura argue ^_^ plz update! and don't make it so confusing as in pairings!
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Reviewed By: Lady Asia00 On: February 06, 2004 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH HELL NO. YOU DIDN'T. YOU HAD THIS GOOD STORY GO DOWN THE DRAIN. YAMI/SETO?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! NO NO NO THIS IS SUPPOSE TO BE A JOEY/SETO!!!!!!!!! THE ONLY REASON I READ THIS BOOK IS BECAUSE IT IS EXACTLY THAT. BUT NO YOU HAD TO MESS IT UP. AND NOW SETO IS CHEATING ON JOEY???? NO NO NO NO NO NO NO DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND ME? READ MY LIPS JJOOEEYY//SSEETTOO I WILL NOT STAND FOR THIS. I'M THE LADY OF THE WEST LANDS. I WILL NOT LET THIS CONTIUNE. FIX IT NOW. OH! AND I DON'T CARE IF YOU HATE ME FOR BEING TRUTHFUL. ~Lady Asia~
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Reviewed By: shadow-spirits On: January 20, 2004 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I likey the booky. More Yami/Bakura (those are so hard to find) Funny twist in your story, i thought it was all fluff Please add fluff? *puppy dog eyes* update soon!
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Reviewed By: Joey'z Sk8tergurl On: January 19, 2004 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, lovey-dovey stuf ain't DAT bad! Anyways, really kewl, strange name fer a book.....*suspicious look* I supose.....aw ferget it! Plz update! I wanna know more! *Evil laughter* Oops, almost forgot, Seto and Jou plushies 4 u!
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Reviewed By: Lady Asia On: January 01, 2004 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was alsome. you must keep on writing. I LOVE THAT BOOK!! please keep on writing. ~Lady Asia~
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Reviewed By: chaos911 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 15:11 CST
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you have to keep writing its realy good ^__^
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great start!! And I must agree Please Finish :)
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 15:10 CST
Comment/Review:
great start! ^_^ i can't wait for more!
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Title: l
Reviewed By: l On: December 29, 2003 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUST FINISH
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Title: k
Reviewed By: k On: December 29, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
must finiush
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Reviewed By: Joey'z Sk8tergurl On: December 29, 2003 02:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is pretty neat! But I have a question, r they gonna have their 'positions' like Kaiba is the high preist and jou a slave or no? I r curious.
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Reviewed By: Rainy (kelchickfrommr@hotmail.com) On: December 29, 2003 01:39 CST
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*sits on the floor* Pwease sir, I want some more *cute puppy dog eyes*
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