"Beating the Heat" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 07:26 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Sad, sad, sad, sad... This section most certainly isn't updated enough. But I'm glad I've stumbled across this one (and kind of wonder why I hadn't before...)! This was beautiful!! XD I couldn't stop laughing! That sounded exactly like I'd imagine Chihaya on a hot day!! X3 I wubbled it!! Hoorays for amazing fics!!
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Title: God... Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 23:34 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: ...God...That was so ~hawt~... (teehee, I couldn't help myself. But, I'll basically back up what Jahiya Kingie. Very good for being so old, though!)
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Reviewed By: Nekay [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 21:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: very creative!! I think their should be more of this fan fic!!! loved it!!
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Title: Prince/Angel Reviewed By: Jahiya Kingie On: July 29, 2004 07:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I Love the story line. (Hint) "not to be taken ofencivly" Read more Yaoi. Verry good. Loved the Creativity. But your story is a lot like some of the ones I have read. Loved the Grammar. Tho I can't say anything. I need a Spell Check!!!!!!!!!! The story is verrrrry discreptive. (Verry good plus!) Here is what I do about the writer's block.(friendly adv.) Read. and a lot too. That helps. But I LOVED it. Thanx. Write more stories. Plz.
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Reviewed By: The Shinigami Tenshi On: March 18, 2004 14:18 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It was cute. I like it. ///_^
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