| "Sex in a Plane" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: idea
Reviewed By: Kikyo_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought of a different title for your fic. "the mile high club." lol.. have fun cant wait to see some of your other work. Kikyo_19
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Title: good work
Reviewed By: lydis On: March 17, 2004 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so good but try to get a bit more intensety on the lemon ^o^
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Title: the whole thing finnally posted
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 15, 2004 10:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I knew talons was another word for claws. the ocher was a new word for me. I think I'll have to use it some time...j/k!!! I loved this story. and no you didn't describe to much on the lemon scene you didn't describe enough...lol...Joking!!! I loved this story I'm emoailing it to my friends now...I couldn't stop laughing it was so good...thanks again.... I rated what I thought was important...I was able to read and understand isn't that enough??? love MN PS what a person to jin the mile high club with!!! the lucky bitch...to bad I will never get on an airplane. That would be a way to have so much fucking fun...BTW...I'm going to take a wild guess and say Kagome was a virgin you just decided to skip the painful interlude...which is a good idea!!!
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Title: a space between Miss and Nikki
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 15, 2004 10:20 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I knew talons was another word for claws. the ocher was a new word for me. I think I'll have to use it some time...j/k!!! I loved this story. and no you didn't describe to much on the lemon scene you didn't describe enough...lol...Joking!!! I loved this story I'm emoailing it to my friends now...I couldn't stop laughing it was so good...thanks again.... I rated what I thought was important...I was able to read and understand isn't that enough??? love MN
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo I love this please make more
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 16:48 EST
Comment/Review:
check.
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Reviewed By: katz21 (too lazy to sign in) On: February 21, 2004 23:48 EST
Comment/Review:
likin ur fic here.......is it okay if i suggest a deifferent title? well, here it is > "the mile high club" get it? heheheh anwayz....tootle loo
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 20:38 EST
Comment/Review:
that was an awsum story. it was like "just married" but better. a sequal would be awsum, but thats up to you. i really really liked it!!
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Title: super_jelly_monkeys@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Crimson Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 18:50 EST
Comment/Review:
Just right. Definitly definitly just right. Mmmm....Mile High Club membership! I so hope you write more, I mean, so much could happen in 28 hours ~innocent look, hentai gleam in eye~. And then on the ground! God, lemony goodness. "When life gives you lemons...." Ahem....yes, I am slightly perverted ~koff koff~slightly~koff koff~. Soooooooooo.....I look forward to anymore writing! XD
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Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 17:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right, how much longer do we have to wait for the vacation part?
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Reviewed By: madammyth On: February 04, 2004 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA *drools* can i have seconds please lol
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Reviewed By: Ecchi hanyou On: January 25, 2004 02:01 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 outa 10 for the lemons whoot! i think you did it just right. On a plane? originality yes 10. CONGRATS!
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Title: CUTE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute!!!!! Only one thing, not enough lemmony goodness. Sorry I'm a REAL big lemmon fan, A.K.A. pervert, or Miroku's family member. I hope its not the later. Anyway great stuff you got here! Hope to see you around again soon! Well later! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 20:38 EST
Comment/Review:
check.
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Reviewed By: ruby youkai On: January 05, 2004 17:48 EST
Comment/Review:
write more write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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