| "Sex in a Plane" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 14:12 EDT
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wow, reading this was so nostalgic. From the last review, it's been 6yrs, n am 19 now lol. Shame on me for reading these explicit stuff so young xP lmao. It was still sweet and me be loving Inu all da time haha |
Reviewed By: jus reviewin On: February 24, 2007 17:02 EST
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talons remind me of birds, but other than that i loved your fanfic. the lemon was just right. i love how you used ocher, amber is played out. im going to go look for more of your fanfics now.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 19:59 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, i was bored so i decided to re-read your fic!^^ I still enjoy as if it was my first. I'm leaving you a comment to ask if you can PLEASE read my first fic! Plz, i'd love to kno what you think^__^ Hope to see a comment there=)
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Reviewed By: ashimi On: May 22, 2006 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was pretty good. i liked the way u used ocher. it made it more origional. but dont ya think 40 hrs is going a little overboard? i mean, it only takes 15 hrs to go from tokyo to l.a.
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Title: 45th
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 20:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Your good at these stuff, continue making more, and please don't dissappoint your readers. You wouldn't want any bad reviws, now would you?
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 05:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes that was a sweet ending. Yes I want to see their actual vacation. Any yeas that lemon was just right. LoL, all your questions answered. I like this story, it has potential to be more than a one-shot, and a good one at that. I have a question though. Is this story modern day, or like Inu in the feudal era? Is sounds like regular modern day, but then why did Inu still have his haori? I hope this story really does become more then a one-shot...
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Reviewed By: Flabor On: July 03, 2005 15:13 EDT
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It's audacity, not audaciousness Learn English
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Title: Sex In A Plane
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 21:43 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Great~
Reviewed By: la89801 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 04:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very original, and decsribed just right. I loved it. L.A.
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Reviewed By: yurble On: February 02, 2005 05:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should have used the word tawny instead of ocher -> sounds better.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 12, 2004 15:23 EST
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no plane can fly for 40 hours straight. that's kinda distracting since it's inaccurate. i agree with who ever said it only takes about 6 hours to fly from hawaii to tokyo or vice versa. good job though.
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Title: Sex in a Plane
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 13, 2004 17:43 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 00:11 EDT
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Wow.... interesting story.... the fact that the place ride is 40 hours long, is kinda distracting. considering that to travel half way around the world only takes 14 hours... and hte typical ride from tokyo to hawaii is about 6 hours... still pretty good
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Title: moonlight miko
Reviewed By: macki711 On: October 11, 2004 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story it's sooooo good!! i love hentai storys. your the beast!!
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Reviewed By: kuramafan58 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:29 EDT
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not enough description of Inu Yasha...
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Reviewed By: eyeii On: August 17, 2004 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowow this is so cool and differnt, i've naver sumthing like this cool be4 plz update more, cant wait till the next fic *wink wink*
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Kagome69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I even had an orgasm...make more stories like this one
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Title: wow!!
Reviewed By: Kagome69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was great
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: love_inuyasha On: May 26, 2004 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say. This story was the best I have ever read! Forget the crap about other movies, you are compltley original! I give it a thumbs up! P.S Make a sequal, it will make it even better. ^_^
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Title: idea
Reviewed By: Kikyo_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought of a different title for your fic. "the mile high club." lol.. have fun cant wait to see some of your other work. Kikyo_19
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Title: good work
Reviewed By: lydis On: March 17, 2004 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so good but try to get a bit more intensety on the lemon ^o^
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Title: the whole thing finnally posted
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 15, 2004 10:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I knew talons was another word for claws. the ocher was a new word for me. I think I'll have to use it some time...j/k!!! I loved this story. and no you didn't describe to much on the lemon scene you didn't describe enough...lol...Joking!!! I loved this story I'm emoailing it to my friends now...I couldn't stop laughing it was so good...thanks again.... I rated what I thought was important...I was able to read and understand isn't that enough??? love MN PS what a person to jin the mile high club with!!! the lucky bitch...to bad I will never get on an airplane. That would be a way to have so much fucking fun...BTW...I'm going to take a wild guess and say Kagome was a virgin you just decided to skip the painful interlude...which is a good idea!!!
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Title: a space between Miss and Nikki
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 15, 2004 10:20 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I knew talons was another word for claws. the ocher was a new word for me. I think I'll have to use it some time...j/k!!! I loved this story. and no you didn't describe to much on the lemon scene you didn't describe enough...lol...Joking!!! I loved this story I'm emoailing it to my friends now...I couldn't stop laughing it was so good...thanks again.... I rated what I thought was important...I was able to read and understand isn't that enough??? love MN
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo I love this please make more
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 16:48 EST
Comment/Review:
check.
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Reviewed By: katz21 (too lazy to sign in) On: February 21, 2004 23:48 EST
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likin ur fic here.......is it okay if i suggest a deifferent title? well, here it is > "the mile high club" get it? heheheh anwayz....tootle loo
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 20:38 EST
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that was an awsum story. it was like "just married" but better. a sequal would be awsum, but thats up to you. i really really liked it!!
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Title: super_jelly_monkeys@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Crimson Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 18:50 EST
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Just right. Definitly definitly just right. Mmmm....Mile High Club membership! I so hope you write more, I mean, so much could happen in 28 hours ~innocent look, hentai gleam in eye~. And then on the ground! God, lemony goodness. "When life gives you lemons...." Ahem....yes, I am slightly perverted ~koff koff~slightly~koff koff~. Soooooooooo.....I look forward to anymore writing! XD
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Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 17:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right, how much longer do we have to wait for the vacation part?
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Reviewed By: madammyth On: February 04, 2004 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA *drools* can i have seconds please lol
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