"The Elemental demons battle" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Title: demons Reviewed By: kags On: September 20, 2005 11:35 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: whoa! thats not bad, i like it, continue writing, kk?
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 00:10 CDT Comment/Review: iNTERESTING, NOT THE BAD ONE THOUGH....OOPS FORGOT TO AKE OFF THE CAPS, I was not yelling, i like your story, can't waite til the fightintg, how will hiei react of kagome gets hurt?DUN DUN DUN!WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 3 Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 19:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Update soon. Can't wait to read how the battles are like. Great story.
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Title: The Elemental Demons Battle Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 17:30 CST Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: The Elemental Demons Battle Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 13:14 CST Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: August 27, 2004 13:34 CDT Comment/Review: OMG this is a really great story i love it you have to update it really soon ok thansk tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:16 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey good story/chapter me likey me can't wait to see wut is goin to happen next and wut about Inuyasha and the others r they goin to be in this story later on???
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Reviewed By: JellBell On: July 29, 2004 15:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! O_o Pleases
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Reviewed By: JellBell On: July 29, 2004 15:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! O_o Pleases
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Reviewed By: wicmgp [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 15:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the premise, the storyline, and of course, the characters. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: April 24, 2004 15:39 CDT Comment/Review: OMG i love the story and i loved the dare Sango and Kurama gave to Hiei and Kagome well anywyas update it really soon ok thanks tootles
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Reviewed By: Youko's_Rose On: March 16, 2004 00:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yea! it only gets better! I never realy thaught of Sango and Kurama as a couple I suppose becouse their personalities are completly opposit. But you made it work, a little short on details but hey you where havin' too much fun with Kagome and Hiei ne? I know I was hehe. Oh and don't worry we don't hate you for making it a Hiei/Kagome fic, or at least I don't you made it work out realy well! GO YOU!! I love it please update soon I'll give ya chacolate if ya do! Aregato for the new chapter and your precious time I feel honoured. Ja ne
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Title: good job Reviewed By: Neikona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 15:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: good job on the story!!! I can't wait for the next one to come! and i saw some of the next chapter its pretty good and whatnot! Since i'm Neika i personaily say "good job on showing my character and hitting the direct point...but where is the guy who makes "fluffy" jealous, huh?" *LAUGHING* WEll anyway, great job on the story not as bad gammar as you did last time! *SHRINKS TO CHIBI SIZE AND EYES GROW BIG* I'M SO PROUD OF YOU!!!!! ^.^ *runs away for safety! you know you love me :P Keep it up
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 15:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update soon! I'm really glad that hiei/kag won!
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 23:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow! Cool fic! I cant beleve somone sent you that flame. That is soo mean! Don't they know how discuraging that is to a author? I just wanted to say that regardless of what other baka revewers think I love your fic. So please keep writing and update soon. Oh yeah I almost forgot can this be a Kurama/Kagome or a Sessho/Kagome fic? Thanks for reading Ja ne.
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