| "The Elemental demons battle" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 15:25 CST
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Update soon. Think Hiei/Kagome would be perfect for this story.
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Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 17:48 CST
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Please make this a KurKag and SanHiei
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl121 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Title: Hey girl
Reviewed By: Neikona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl, its me agian neikona/neika. Great story loved it so far. you know me not good at spelling my self but when you don't use the right spelling or grammar you throw the person off story and the mood you put them in. But loved the fanfic so far and put a little bit more of the others in it, but that will probably come later right? well i can't wait to read what you have next. bye bye sis
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 18:25 CST
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hey love the chapter and story it's sooo good so update soon tootles
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: February 09, 2004 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it's sooo good and i cant wait to see what happends next so update real soon ok tootles
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Reviewed By: A.N.A. On: February 01, 2004 21:50 CST
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Okaaaaaaaay.....ummm, I'm getting confused with the whole younger Toguro and older one and Tpguro Ani. Ahhh! Which is which?
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Reviewed By: BarbaraSheridan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 11:06 CST
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I saw your post on the forum about the flame and thought I'd take a look since I didn't have a chance to do so earllier. I have to say that I can understand why the other reviewer posted what they did. I'm guessing you put up this story as soon as you wrote it? If so you really, really should wait a few days after writing your chapters and read them over or have a friend look them over because there are a lot of spelling and especially grammar mistakes that pull readers out of the story. This isn't meant as a flame bu tto be helpful. If you like to write please keep doing so because the more you write the better you become and also please read as many stories in your favorite genre as you can so you can pick out what works, what doesn't.
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Reviewed By: Chrislea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Based off your writing skills alone I have to assume that you're somewhere between ten and thirteen years of age. In which case, do your parents know what you're writing? If you actually are an adult, then you should be ashamed of yourself for your grade-school grammar and lack of imagination. Look, I'm sorry, but this fic is terrible. I can't find one redeeming quality in it.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! please make this a hiei/Kag!
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: Neikona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you go girl! this is neikona. love the story just hurry up and post more okay! Thx for using me as the keeper of dreams. keep writing and your story gave me another idea for my fanfic. hehehe ~.^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 18:38 CST
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This is really good and i cant wait to see what happends so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 14:24 CST
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i luv it ! plz upadte date soon! Hiei/Kag pairing plz
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: December 30, 2003 16:18 CST
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i luv it plz write more and i wanta hiei/kag piar and kur/san pretty plz!!?!?! k bai bye
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