| "New World Order" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:09 CST
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or demon..... whatever you did
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:08 CST
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just wanted to know? How is a human/cyborg physical relationship possible? I mean, come on..... how do you get #ent@| material from a robot (which is made of metal and other non-organic things) and a human?
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Title: COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!0_0
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo COOL!!!!!!!! You got to write more PLEASE!!!!!!!! That was cool making Kag a cyborg(sp)!!!!!! But, man, Inu had to go tell a big mouth, and now Kag's secret is out, that has to suck!!!!! But PLEASE write more!!!! This is geting good!!!!!!! Well, bye for now, talk at yah later!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Random_Acts_Of_Turquoise [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic. Very Treminator.(please excuse my spelling) But, it seems a bit jumpy if u know what I mean and I think a bit more detail would help fix that problem. Please keep up dating.
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