| "The Tree and the Well: What Was Left Unsaid." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: hiei jagan jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 11:35 CST
Comment/Review:
You spelled future wrong and I don't get the story much so yeah.
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Title: Sakura
Reviewed By: baby_kistune23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story! i cann't wait till the next chappie! at least i hope u update....cuz it looks like u haven't since may 2004. :) Ja ne! !)
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Title: Oops!
Reviewed By: Youkos_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 21:31 CST
Comment/Review:
See Look I do beleve that I just proved my own point by spelling chapters captors not capitalizing one of my I's and spelling becouse beecouse. Oops! Oh well I never did claim to be perfect If everyone was perfect the world would be a pretty boring place ne?
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story I really like it. I cant wait to see what happens next! Also could i request that this be a Kagome/Kurama or a Kagome/Yoko/Kurama pairing? It is your choice of course it is just that I think that they would look soo kwaii together. I also wanted to suggest that you either have a friend proof read your capters before you post them or that you use spell check. Please do not get me wrong I love the story and I think that you are a great writer but even famous authors have people that edit their work beecouse to err is human and everyone makes mistakes. Thanks for the wonderful story. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 17:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Who are the couples? I hope it's KuramaKagome or KagomeYouko. Just a suggestion.
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
good! this is the first inu-yasha fic im reading so make it good ^_~ lol. but when the sould talk its a bit confusing.
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