"Paybacks are fun!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: neko~demon Reviewed By: nekoku On: March 24, 2004 17:12 CST Comment/Review: I agree about the where's marik and bakura thing but hey its a good story anyways. plz update soon cause im anxious to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jazencrou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 11:38 CST Comment/Review: This is a good fiction so far, especially hilarious when Yami, Anzu and Honda/Tristan get beaten up. Sorry Yami! But the punctuation needs work. It's otherwise quite good, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: divastarz63 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 18:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic is really good, but what happened to Bakura and Marik?
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