| "Blooming Roses" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Title: another chapt plz
Reviewed By: love_anime_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wagh.... can u rite 'nother chapt to dis... itz so frickin good.... umm... lessee... i also wanna kno wat happenz to carol and if dee will b fine afterwardz.... itz not fair u left dem like dat.... tho i liked bikky and lai being together.... ^^... plz rite mor to dis.....
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Your story was wicked awsome! I loved every minute of it!! I can't wait to read the sequel!! Is there going to be a sequal? Is there? Huh? Huh? Huh? Please say there'll be a sequal!!!!*blinks cutely*
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 08:17 CST
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That was fantastic. The first fic I've seen when Bikky is gay!!! I loved it. Please Please pretty Please do a Sequel. I would really apprecihatie it. (yes I know that's spelled wrong) ^_~ Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: sakura petals On: March 28, 2004 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I didn't review sooner but I finally was able to read your chapter today and I don't really say things like this but the lemon was *blush* good *blush* AHHHH! STOP BLUSHING! *slap* *slap* *slap*. *pant* *pant* ok i'm better now update soon and the preview just by reading it I can tell it's going to be good.
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool!! The preview definitely got my attention as well. Keep it up!!!
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Title: I know I'm the Author, but....
Reviewed By: Funny Bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 22:36 CST
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I still couldn't help but respond to some of your comments.... Especially after the quick twist/ cliffy and the compaired reactions... I'm shocked that so many of you who were crying with fear for Lai ended up crying for joy when he lived.... It's just too funny.... Like I said, though, use the idea! I would like to see different variations on this pairing out there! I mean come on, the two were just BEGGING to be paired up! (I really like watching my ideas spread creating other ideas... I'm not kidding when I say it's okay to take the pairing! My only request is that you post them where I can read them, because heck, I want to see something creative once in a while, it feels good to inspire, even better to be inspired by something you know you inspired!)
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Reviewed By: Demeter On: February 22, 2004 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE continue i'm sooooooooo happy Lai didn't die can't wait for the next chapter please hurry
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Reviewed By: sakura petals On: February 14, 2004 10:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAHOO!LAI IS ALIVE! Geez I'm so happy the chapter was GREAT! This chapter made me cry with relief I'm crying right now *Sniff* *Sniff* Gosh I'm getting emotional I'll be waiting to see what happens next *smile*.
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Lai is okay!! And will that do it! Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
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Title: ;_;
Reviewed By: GirTheCatGirl@msn.com On: February 09, 2004 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gasp!!! Oh no!! LAI!!! is he going to be okay? poor bikky. ;_; AHH!!! I need to know!! *faint*
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Reviewed By: Athena-Lee On: January 24, 2004 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, no. Lai!! I hope he doesn't die. If he does I won't enjoy the story as much as i have been enjoying it. I love this story. It is really good. Keep writing. Ill keep reviewing.Athena-Lee
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Reviewed By: AmyFreeman On: January 23, 2004 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This the first time I have read a story like this one and I LLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEEE it so much you have no idea. I am so into fake that I have read so many different ones and was beginning to get tired reading the Fake fanfic. But thanks to you I have been happy to note that i am getting back into reading them. Thanks bunches. But PPPPLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEE don't let Lai die in the next chapture or I will cry my eyes out. (._.) See I beginning to cry now. So I say with all my heart PLeaSE don't kill Lai. Well that about does it for my review. *_*
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Reviewed By: DuctTapeGod On: January 21, 2004 21:17 CST
Comment/Review:
*big starry anime eyes* I LOOOOOVE this story. Very cute ^^ but you are so evil....cliffhangers give cancer!! cancer is bad for you... *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: sakura petals On: January 20, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO! What happened to Lai? GOSH! you made me get tears in my eyes I feel like crying.PLEASE let Lai be fine in the next chapter DON'T LET HIM DIE PLEASE! (Sob)
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Reviewed By: sakura petals On: January 20, 2004 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NO! What happened to Lai? GOSH! you made me get tears in my eyes I feel like crying.PLEASE let Lai be fine in the next chapter DON'T LET HIM DIE PLEASE! (Sob)
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!! What happened?! I hope Lai is okay?! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: sakura petals On: January 19, 2004 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHH! My hearts thumping madly and I don't know why maybe it was the chapter.YUP! It was the chapter i'm so happy. I'll wait for the next chapter to come *smile*.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: January 17, 2004 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ROFLMAO* Too funny! I got nothing against Bikky/Lai! My onky Q is are u gonna use Lai's weird powers in this? Cuz I have FAKE manga #1-5. And I noticed that Lai has the ability to float people in mid-air...*grabs volume 5 and rechecks it* Yup, he can float in some kinda of fireball! And I SO wanna see how Ryo reacts! U know I thought Dee would want to tease Bikky, since he's so homophobic in the manga... Or was he in denial? Hm? *muses over the possiblitites*
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Reviewed By: me On: January 16, 2004 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!! i really like this fic
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Reviewed By: juumaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, it's sooo cute. Please, keep it coming!
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Title: MORE PLEASE?
Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 09:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I finally got a chance to read this. Sorry for taking so long. I really like the idea of Bikky and Lai (Or Rai as he was really meant to be called). I have the Manga RA-I that's why I said that. No worries though, Tokyo Pop also did that with Reo by calling him Leo. Anyway, this is good and I relly do look forward to the next chapter. I like how you have Bikky and Lai/Rai taking things slow and allowing the tension to build between them. Just don't feel the need to rush the scenes. Allow them to play out naturally and above all, have fun with writing! Now just to add some creative critiquing to this as well... Dee is bisexual and states that many times. Also, I think that Ryo wouldn't freak on Bikky considering he himself is in a relationship with a man. I would think that Ryo would caution Bikky to be very sure about his feelings and to understand that being in a same sex relationship is not without it's own set of problems. He might even use his and Dee's relationship and problems that have occured as a result of it, as exmples. Dee would most likely the one to really lay it into Bikky as a way of testing him and seeing if he's strong enough to handle the heat. Keep in mind, these are just my opinions and not meant in a negative way. I am thoroughly enjoying this story and wait eagerly to see where it leads. Good luck with it and I will be keeping my eyes out for the next chapter. If you send me HTML copies of this, I'd be more than happy to archive it on my site as well. Just go to my site and see the submissions page for the info I need for posting. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope the date goes well. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: sakura petals On: January 05, 2004 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story really sparked my interest and it's cute!I'll be waiting to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: LordOfTheDuctTape On: January 03, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this made me happy....you are one of the few who see this relationship. Nice fic, and I like the relationship you've created between Dee and Bikky. Cute ^_^ just, be a little nicer to Ryo, kay?
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 16:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Perfect 10 as usual! I can't wait to see how their first real date comes out! Till then!
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cute! I can't wait till you post the next chapter! I hope it's soon!
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