| "Where I'll Return" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
Reviewed By: leviathan06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow really good. Very interesting. I have an idea on who the mystery man is but I could be wrong. For me the mystery man is Leon. Why? 1 Because when he was watching over Sora he heard Sora whisper Riku's name. 2 I have played the game Final Fantasy 8 and that world is full of monsters. I haven't played Kingdom Hearts in while now acctually its been a year :p anywho but I don't remember if they mention anything about Leon's world, but in FF8 I do know that the place is swarming with monsters. Anyhwo continue writing this fic. Loved to read more of it. leviathan06
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Reviewed By: Sairu9 On: April 27, 2005 07:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Next chappie!!!Pls update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nora D On: February 28, 2005 18:46 CST
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*squee* Now this... this is one of the better fanfics I've read in so, so long. The writing, the plot, I really love it. I really can't think of any criticism to make- I'll get back to you if I do. I'll get back to you anyway, actually. PS: I'd love to read Uzumaki-sama's fics... but I can't find her! Please give us a link in the next chapter. ^___^
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: November 08, 2004 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue please?
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: November 08, 2004 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue please?
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAIIII You`re fanfic is marvolus! *clapps* please keep up the great work!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: June 24, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
p..l..e.a..s..e.. h..u..r..r..y i ..w..i..l..l.. d..i..e.. w..a..i..t..i..n..g.. f..o..r.. y..o..u..r.. n..e..x..t.. c..h..a..p..t..e..r.........
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Reviewed By: DragonDame57 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgsh! you must update this fic! it's sooooo good! ^^ riku seems so protective! it's so cute =] and i hope they come to terms with their feelings~ and is kuja gonna be involved with sora or sumthin? i mean, after all, he was checking him out.. ^^;; and that would be kind of cool! *i love love triangles and jealousy* um.. update soon? ^____________^
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Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: May 04, 2004 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've waited for sooooo looooong.I've been waited from last month.PLEASE UPDATE MORE QUICKLY
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Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: March 25, 2004 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update more of it.PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: curiouskitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really sweet fic, I really like it, most of the Kingdom Hearts fic on mm.org are... not so good. But this one is different. Please update soon. Can't wait 'till your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: March 14, 2004 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy realy realy realy realy like this story please update more quickly!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: March 10, 2004 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update morE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: GirTheCatGirl@msn.com On: February 16, 2004 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow! You MUST finish! I'll be waiting for the next installment!!!
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: February 12, 2004 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not me who write the word 'your fic stinks' it's my stupid little brother.he liked kingdom hearts but he hate your fic and write those words.I REALLY LIKED YOUR FIC , PLEASE UPDATE MORE AND PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: January 28, 2004 05:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR FIC STINKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinako [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 18:43 CST
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This story's getting interesting. Keep up the good work. :)
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Reviewed By: nightingail of the forest On: January 20, 2004 15:34 CST
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who the hell is KUJA OR WHATEVER! where is he from dammit
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: January 20, 2004 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother house.And I hope when I come back chapter three will be on. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will be at home at next week monday.
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: January 18, 2004 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And can you make the chapter 3 get update qiuckly i only have 2 more days to wait for your chapter because i will go away to my grandmother village at Nabawan.PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: January 18, 2004 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!!!!
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: January 18, 2004 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!!!!
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: January 18, 2004 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!!!!
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: January 18, 2004 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work.I can't wait for the next chapter.And I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO SORA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Where I'll Return
Reviewed By: RiKuChAn On: January 18, 2004 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work.I can't wait for the next chapter.And I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO SORA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yuffie--chan On: January 10, 2004 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it sounds alot like sphiroth from FFVII...I have no idea, but it's the only pale person i can think of right now, (I just beat FFVII)^-^ well, I really like the yaoi-ness, love riku/sora and everything else about the story really! please update! Could you possibly have a second pairing? whatever, you're story's awsome!? ^-^
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Reviewed By: nightengail of the forest On: January 10, 2004 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
probably riku and ansem. who else? keep it up
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Reviewed By: K Winchester On: December 31, 2003 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh ooooh! Um..... I want to say Ansem, cause well, that's where the goodness is S/A/R! ^.^ Though Malicifent was talkin to someone pale, and Ansem is not pale, soooo..........Captian Hook? ~shudders~ that sounds so WRONG!!! Then again he didn't speak like him......so......I don't know! ^.^ ::Yohji and Aya fall down Anime style:: Yotan: Your an idiot. -_-;; K: This comming from you ~mimicks Yotan~ Oh Asuka!!! Yotan: Shut up!!! >_<
Aya: ::picks up shiney katana:: Shi-ne!!!! Yotan & K: O.O ::Silence:: Okay....back to my answer. Ansem did fuse with Rikku at the ending of the game and that was when we finally saw him. Soooo....maybe in the fusion it changes his physical apperance. So I'm going to say Ansem. Plus that is where the yaoi goodness in this game is so yeah, Ansem. Give me my Pocky!!! ^.^ Love the story, K Winchester
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