| "The Knight of Shadow" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: The Knight of Shadow
Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your latest chapter is as always the most interesting. So much so that I would like to borrow your storyline from you and use it to incorporate another character that I came up with. It's that good, believe me. I don't just say this to any fanfic writer I come across the Net. Keep up the good work! ;)
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Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a big fan of the yaoi, but I still like the story. I happy to see that you continued with it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter(hopefully yaoi-less). Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: A reader On: November 16, 2004 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ranma is not into guys no matter how much your yaoi-soaked fanboi (spelling intentional) mind might hope. As of this point in the story, there is nothing left of Ranma at all is just a thinly-veiled SI char. With that aside, this isn't a bad story overall, but it certinatly isn't incredibly engaging.
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have written a good story. I'm a fan of Ranma anime but not of Inuyasha so that is saying a lot. So Ranma becomes god, eh? The House of Shadows? I'm not familiar with that series so I can't say. Please continue. Whatever you do? I suppose you could always let Ranma find the Moonstone of the Shianti and then that would make his job of becoming god a lot faster. Or a Dungeon Heart. Or the Philosopher's Stone. Anyway, it was a story. Keep writing. Bye!
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Reviewed By: HappyPig [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable fic, i may not like the slight yaoi scene but over all very good and i'm looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Nameless Author [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 02:28 CST
Comment/Review:
ok the story is interesting. but i will point out that Ranma IS NOT gay in the sense that he likes other men. no if he is any way gay it is that he LIKES women and women only. no offense but you really took ranma and did a 180 with is sexual preferences. it is even stated in the manga and anime that he LIKES women and not men. there are points where ranma has had nightmares about starting to like men but nothing has come of it. and there is the time he lost his memory of who he was and thought he was a girl. but that was due to a HEAD trauma and not a willful change unlike what you have wrote into here. so please if you are writing the fic, keep ranma to his original sexuality.
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Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few problems with how it's written(mostly in the first part) but overall this is the start of what could be a great story. I'm really looking foward to seeing where you take this and hope to see an update soon.
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Reviewed By: nameless author On: March 25, 2004 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
the reason why i gave this such low ratings is because of how you typed it out. you continually switched back and forth between present and past tense writing prose. which is bad for writing. all fiction in books and fanfiction is WRITTEN in past tense writing prose. the constant switching and minor spelling errors pretty much turned me off to the entire story. no offense or anything i just suggest fixing your story and start writing in past tense period for describing what is going on.
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Reviewed By: GateDragon On: January 01, 2004 16:41 CST
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Has a bit of a overused cop-out 'Oh my god! Genma is a sneaky genius who knows magic and uses it to control Ranma' and lacks pre-story depth (in the ranma½ part) though a prolog could clear that up. If done from Genma or Ranma's point-of-view you could easily compensate for both. But other than that it's just what I've been waiting for. A 3+ series fic thats: part book / part anime / part ranma½ is one of my personal favorite types. Sic Semper Morituri (Lovecraft/Evangelon/Ranma½/AMG!) A Cold Dish (Dark Elf Trilogy/Ranma½/Sailor Moon)
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is actually interesting! Can't wait for an update, which I hope is soon ne? Ja!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 10:47 CST
Comment/Review:
This has piqued my interest. I'll be on the look out for more of this one.
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