| "What?!" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: lazyass On: November 28, 2004 12:43 CST
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I'm so sorry I'm laughing at all the serious parts. You have to write more comedy.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please please please please please please please please update soooooonnnnn !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: February 15, 2004 22:11 CST
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sorry that was meant to be "finally you can live without fear"
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: February 15, 2004 22:10 CST
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hello this is an awesome fic and i hope you continue updating it, the last chapter you have is a good amount, and i hope soon that kagome will become friends with inuyasha and inuyasha and sesshoumaru will fight over her and kagome will choose sesshy. over him, then sesshy will confront naraku with something like "how could you do this to kogome!" then throw a punch at him then sesshy and naraku get in an intense fight and sesshy will win but spare narakus life and call the police (after narakus beating) and tell him all about what he'd bee doing to kagome and then they'll go to court and naraku will be sentenced to death or something and then sesshy will be like "finally we can live with you fear" then like they have kids and then happily ever after! but thats just how i think the ideal thing would turn out but its not my story so UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: liams little one On: January 31, 2004 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories, but why do you insist on raping Kagome?. Lucky for me I just skip over those parts. That's just the one thing I don't like in your stories.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* all that's needed in a title is the tiniest hint at what is happening in the chapter, its very simple...and Miroku isn't spelled Miruko k...*sigh* I'm off to read something else
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Reviewed By: tigerlily On: January 02, 2004 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like ur fic but the chapters are really short. can u please make ur chapters longer. and keep up the great writing
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Title: what?!
Reviewed By: lee lee On: January 01, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with you on the part about rape and hope that you update soon please
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it but could you make the chapters alittle longer it good
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 13:36 CST
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VERY INTERESTING! I HATE RAPISTS AND CHILD ABUSERS, BUT I KNOW YOUR GOING TO HAVE SESSY KILL NARAKU. RIGHT? You wouldn't NOT kill Naraku, Right? *EVIL GLARE* If you don't I'll stick my muse, Starflame Dragon, on you! Adiso!
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