| "Door to the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sheik2711 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 21:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep going! NO lemons..please...I hate those..yuck! Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalvr9 On: January 30, 2004 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didnt enjoy this fic that much because there is just one short and kinda boring chapter. Make it longer and add a lemon or do that in the next chapter if ur gonna make one. I think it was good, but no lemon or long chapter. Inuyashalvr9
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Reviewed By: nightingail of the forest On: January 25, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome! please keep it up
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