| "Alone And Forgotten Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel of Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE THIS SOON PLZ I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR A FREAKIN LONG TIME!!!! ...sorry i'm just po'd becuz kingdom hearts 2 is not coming out this september but this WINTER!!!!! ...again sorry for that! and i must ask, will this be a y/yy pairing? well if not then just DONT pair up ANY of the hikari's OR the yami's with that girl...plz? i just dont like her. keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Tiara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Marik and Malik as his friends? Original. It's a shame you didn't continue, considering it is a good start for a story. So please continue soon. Pretty please?
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Title: dunno
Reviewed By: jus r/rin On: March 22, 2004 18:32 CST
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2ndx im readin still cry. GO MARIK N MALIK!!!poor Yugi NO KAIBA!!!NO BaKuRa!!!!NO fair!!!!UpDaTe soon
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 09:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I think it's s ocute that Malik and Marik care about Yugi. This is definitely an original idea! i loved it! Please continue very soon!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:23 CST
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Very good. I liked Yugi's emotions. Marik and Malik being his friends seems very ironic compared to his supossed friends. Anyways, is Ryou(hikari) and Bakura (yami) in the story? and UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Please? Update!
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Title: AWWWW!!!
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you have to finish this story i must know what happens to poor little yugi...*sniffle sniffle* I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL YUGI!!!! PLEASE DON'T DIE ON ME!!!! great fic please please PLEASE continue you beatiful work!^^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: nikalu On: January 31, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was awesome! yes, it's really sad, but hey, it's still a good story. Finish it ASAP, k? p.s.: YOU RULE!!!!!!
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Title: Alone And Forgotten Forever
Reviewed By: wowwee On: January 29, 2004 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good! I cried! Im not that criing girl! please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hazel/inuyashagirl On: January 04, 2004 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very creative but I would at least had tea care about him or something like that.
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Reviewed By: Jazencrou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 14:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I think it's interesting so far, and also a little sad. A little. I'm not a person to describe things as 'sad'. But it's a VERY good story, who would've thought Malik and Marik would be his only other friends? Very good. I hope you write more soon!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 13:16 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOO POOOR YUGI! *starts crying * NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SO SAD! *sniff * please update soon! *sniff *
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