| "The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 25
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 17:48 CST
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Okay…Heero's investigating something's on his computer. What…we have no idea!! Quatre seems to be having a nervous breakdown!!! Business seems to be getting tense…Wufei's cursing and Duo's almost panicking!!! Who is Relena meeting and why? I'm taking its lunch time on Friday…boy there sure is a lot ground to cover in the next 48 hrs…*smiles*…you know, loose ends to tie up…*wink*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 25, 2004 11:40 CST
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great chapter =D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 25, 2004 11:31 CST
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so confused...lol luv the story
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Reviewed By: coldsiren On: January 25, 2004 02:13 CST
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ooops gomen.. i realized that your updating everyday.. and i dont have to tell you please update soon.. hehe my wrong... got to tell you thank you for updating everyday. ^_^ im enjoying reading your fic.
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Reviewed By: coldsiren On: January 25, 2004 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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sugoi! ur so great please update soon. i love your fic!^____________________^
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool that was fun i love it lol great chap luv ya for updating so often!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 24
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 19:03 CST
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You know Quatre even better then I thought…if he's feeling the effects of Heero's shower… Its Friday…you would think *glares* that we would be getting some of the *many* questions answered, but nooooooo…just more questions…What call did Heero make? To whom? Why does he have to call ever week? Why does he think this might be the last week by looking around the penthouse? Not is seems there's a big mystery surrounding Trowa!!! Always waiting for more…*smiles* Sorry, it so short…brain sluggish…
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH, wow! this is such a wonderful story! I love it to death and love that you update so frequently. I hope they hook up soon. When I first saw this I thought, oh they're using pretty woman... I like pretty woman..saw it a thousand times....Why not!!!??? lol, I love it! Please continue and I love the little twist you're throwing in there. Loving your story to death!
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what was all that about please explain??????????????? did that girl die omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why is heero so unsatble???????????????????.................... love it anyway amazing it not lie pretty woman at all! pretty woman seems like guide lines more than the plot i change my rating 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 23, 2004 14:15 CST
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I like this fic. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: feckless On: January 22, 2004 21:31 CST
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yay! another great chap! yay! as always update again soon. flashbacks are fun . . .
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 23
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 16:37 CST
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I see Heero's having dreams. Starts out fine…he's dreaming of nice times, fond memories. I'm still after 23 chapters unsure of Heero's relationship with this girl-woman. It's very confusing, and I wouldn't begin to speculate the extent of said relationship…except to say that she obliviously means - or - as it appears now meant a great deal to him… If Heero's friend is indeed dead as the ending dream scene led me to believe, then the speculation I had about Dorothy is incorrect. Even though I didn't get any answers and you left me with a Hell of a lot more questions I sense this dreams is very important for the story. So many twist and turns, I haven't been wrong with my speculations on a story this many times in a very long time… I do have to say…regardless whether I'm right or wrong…" I feel that this chapter and the last one are turning points. I wonder how much work Duo will really get done today and if he'll start his investigation into Heero's past? Ahhh…Quatre feeling all alone…I hope Trowa at the bar. If he is maybe we can find out a little more about the mystery surrounding Quatre. Tonight's the night…Meiran and Wufei go to the bar…waiting to see if maybe it's Trowa's bar *grins* Like I said… I have a lot more questions and you've caused me to rethink what I have thought…Hahahaha!!! *smiles* Maybe I should just stop trying to second guess where your going with this story and just sit back and enjoy…*smile*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 14:33 CST
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YEAY a happy lemon =D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 14:14 CST
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sry about the blank review but mm wouldnt let me push the submit button. i love your story and i love your writing and the updates. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 14:13 CST
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