| "The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: G0d3zZi3 On: January 13, 2004 05:44 CST
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Another Great Chapter!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 20:08 CST
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poor meiran...did i spell that rite..
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 16:16 CST
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Hmmm...seems Wufei has some unresolved issues from his past, but did he have to deck Heero...well I guess Heero did sort of ask for it with that comment about Wefei's wife...then again if Wufei hadn't insulted him and Relena he would never have said it...Ahhhh, my head's starting to hurt....hahahaha!!!! I'm starting to feel bad for Milliardo( I never feel bad for him), he's trying so hard to make sure his sister is taken take care. It's starting to get very compilcated. What's Treize going to do? Will Milliardo have a nerveous breakdown? Can Wefei make it up to his wife? Who in the sam hill is Dermail and what does he have to with the story? Where is Heero going? Will he show up at the Hotel? Guess where ever he goes he'll have to walk. Why does Duo care if Heero shows up or not...is it just the verbal contract or could there be more? Of course if he hadn't opened his mouth most of what just happened would have been avoided. Ahhhh...are you trying to drive me crazy? A little bit here and a little bit there, but nothing to sink my teeth in. I'm sitting here pulling my hair out...*smiles*...ouch that hurts... As always looking forward to more!!!
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very goo di love it it great pleaze hurry up and finish luv ya writting skillz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 11, 2004 21:23 CST
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WOW! Must be my lucky day! I woke up this morning and the first thing I saw was a chapter. I check it out again tonight and there it is ch. 12! This chapter was cool. Update soon and keep doing a great job.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 19:17 CST
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i luv this story =)
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Reviewed By: siti On: January 11, 2004 18:32 CST
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the plot thickens eh? continue soon please.
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 11:57 CST
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Great Chapter...*nods head*! Hmmm...seems like Heero can handle a rifle pretty damn good...wonder why that is? *Winks*...first a laptop than a gun...what's next a Gundam...hahahahaha!!! Indeed a very interesting story!!! I'm soooo happy you update as often as you do, otherwise the suspense would be more than I could take...hahahaha. One sad point..."he's a fucking WHORE"...my heart clenched and I hissed bastard! I know it's part of the story line, but still I saw RED, I would have throttle Duo if I could have...hahahaha!!! "Treize Khushrenada", who saw that coming? I did...*big smile*...now the question is where...is it going? I noticed you have this posted on FF.Net as well. Maybe I"ll review there next time...*smiles*. Waiting...for more!!!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 11, 2004 10:55 CST
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Update soon and keep up the good job.
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Title: another chapter!!
Reviewed By: G0d3zZi3 On: January 11, 2004 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this fic, seems like Heero is mysteriously hiding from someone, I like it! Keep updating! Good luck!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 23:28 CST
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another great chapter! n thx for the blurb at the end or i would have never known bout the whole heracles thing. tho i would prolly have looked it up
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 20:11 CST
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Cool, sort of a laid back chapter...*smiles*! I must said I am getting more curious about Heero past with every chapter and why does he continue to wear that wig? Is he afraid someone will recogize him? Better safe then sorry I guess...*grins* Hope to read another one tomorrow...*wink*!
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed the story i gave u a low score on originality because of course ur copying pretty woman but heero being so sexy! damn. i find duo confusing and when the hell do we get to find out what happened to Heero to make him become a whore? any way amazing take on pretty woman please continue to update as frequently as u have been. plesae don't end it like pretty woman though i hate the ending of pretty woman (lol)
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Ch 10
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 17:38 CST
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Oh, Duo that wasn't right...*smirks*...leaving Heero hanging that way. I was hoping to find out what the other thing was Duo added to the order...maybe next chapter...*smiles*! Hmmm... the perfect laptop...nice touch better than diamonds and rudies(what would he do with them anyway?} Well, I watched Pretty Woman last night...with my vivid imagation is was easy to replace Richard Gere and Julia Roberts with Duo and Heero...well for the most part...*smiles*! Looking forward to the next update...*nods head grinning like an idiot*...
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Reviewed By: water-soter On: January 09, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I soooo love this fic! VERY original, but, I'm having major problems reading from chappie 6 and up. Everytime I try to access them, they don't appear. I know it's a lot to ask, but I was wondering if you could e-mail me chappie 6 and up at wwww.water_soter@yahoo.com ? Pretty please! I REALLY want to read the rest of the chappies. Water-Soter
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