| "Seduction By The Pool" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Blaire B On: January 15, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this so much!!! It is one of the best stories I have read. I'm a sucker for Trunks and Pan pairings!!!
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Reviewed By: swissmiss On: June 23, 2004 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
i don't know what you're talking about, YOUR ENDING WAS HILARIOUS!
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Reviewed By: someone333333000003 On: February 22, 2004 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really good i laughed so hard at the end I feel sorry for Pan and Trunks that must have been embarassing
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Reviewed By: xAngel of the Nightx (not signed in) On: January 19, 2004 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the whole thing... extremely hot, and a cute ending to top it all off! I definitely want to read more from you. -A
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Reviewed By: cuteandperdy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 10:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked the story- it was good! Your endings don't stink- they leave me in some sort of a suspense! good job!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 01, 2004 14:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Ending was so cute! How many kids have block out walking in on Parents "playing"? That was great! Bravo! Adios!
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