| "Magicing the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 23:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't tell you much about this fic considering it's very confusing and short. I guess the mage they found is Kurama? I don't know. You said ten reviews before an update and that's way too many to ask. 5 is pushing it. It's too short to judge anything right now. I also am kinda confused by the extra characters you added. You need to write more before I can give you an honest good or bad or okay on this fanfic. The small amount of fanfic you give with such a high demand for reviews means you probably won't be posting the next chapter anytime soon, which makes me kinda angry. Next time, ask for fewer reviews and give more fanfic. Giving only 1 short chapter is highly annoying. I dislike it when people cut their stories short just waiting for reviews. If you write more, I'll give you my opinion but I can't give you any literary feedback right now besides it's too short.
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Title: story
Reviewed By: InuYasha1970 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE the story. Keep up the good work. I can't wait until you write the next chapters. I am just curious is Kannan supposed to be Kurama, Janito supposed to be Kurone and the boy Kannan saved supposed to be Hiei?
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Reviewed By: Bob500 On: April 07, 2005 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was okay. Revise a little bit (Then again, that could just be my slight withdrawel making me see things {I am not a drugy, I have to take medicine for verious problems.})
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Reviewed By: ????? On: April 07, 2005 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sucked
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Reviewed By: critic501 On: June 17, 2004 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with 'Curry'. you should write for yourself and because you love it, not for others. Anyways, please continue. If you really want to finish the story, just finish it! ^__^
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Reviewed By: foxyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic=) i enjoyed it very much. update as soon as you can PLEASE!!.no rush.i will understand a writers block.
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Reviewed By: Curry On: January 30, 2004 10:28 CST
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Looks like this stoy could go places, if you realy like your ideas, write for this YOU, not other people. They and their approval are only the extra cream on the cake later. In the meanwhile you will have something worth while to YOU to show for your efforts. ENJOY!
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Reviewed By: SKF [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great fic, Please continue... Love'd the Cricket jokes...
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