| "I Want To Love You" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chey1391 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 17:56 CDT
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HURRY OF ELSE I'LL FIND YOU TAKE YOUR IDEAS ,TICKEL YOU TO DAETH, THAN TYP THE REST OF THE STORY.(I for got that in my last one.)I'LL GEVE YOU TO THE COUNT OF 20 TO START TYPING!!!1.................................................2............... ..................................3........................................ .........4.................................................5............... ..................................6........................................ .........7.................................................8............... ..................................9........................................ .........10.................................................11............. ....................................12..................................... ............13.................................................14
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Reviewed By: Chey1391 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 17:46 CDT
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Cool Cool Cool but I think that he should go to the club as weel as Inuyasha with Kikyo so she can'learn'something.Inuyasha should relise who Kagome is and stops her from going to the dressing roms when he sees Sango come out and ask Kagome whitch outfit she was wharing so she could clash but in a good way.That would be toatally cool!!Them working together and almost kissing as a part of the act as Kagura pulls Sango into anothe exotic dance as Yura Pulls Kagome into an even more exotic dance that makes the brothersthink about what she is kapable of in and out of the gutter. ^_^__^___^____^_____^ (",)
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Title: HURRY UP
Reviewed By: GONLOVER123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U BETTER UPDATE FAST OR I"LL FIND U AND RIP YOUR FINGERS OFF SO U CAN"T TYPE.........GOT THAT.........GOOD
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Reviewed By: inu lover kag / anime girl k On: June 01, 2004 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE !!!!!PLEASE!!!!!! FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS HOLY UP DATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I"v been reading your story and can't wait to find out how sesshy and kag will come out in the end! will they find love and will sesshy find out about kagome's night life?! PLEASE UP DATE SO I CAN LEARE THE NEW SPICY DETAILS!!!!!!! PLEASE HURRY AND UP DATE!!!!!!!! THANKS ALWAYS FROM : INU LOVER KAG / ANIME GIRL K.
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Reviewed By: inuyashas honey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your story and it seems pretty good. There just seem to be a couple holes I need you to fill in for me. What happened to Inuyasha? At the begining of the story he seemed like he would be an important character, but he seems to have disappeared from the story. And why do Inuyasha and Sesshomaru look alike? Are they brothers in the story? Has Kagome not worked in the club since she danced for Sess? Or does Sess just not go to the club every night? Why hasn't he recognized her yet? Kagura and Kagome seemed like friends when we first meet Kagura, so why was she hating on Kagome when they met at the club when she was out with Sess? Why did they act like they didn't know each other? So if you could help me out with these things, that would be cool. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Dragoon145 On: May 11, 2004 19:08 CDT
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ok simply put .... Bliss please make more and soon!!
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Reviewed By: Dragoon145 On: May 11, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok simply put .... Bliss please make more and soon!!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLz UPDATE ASAP OK THIS GRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!
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Reviewed By: miroku_lover On: April 18, 2004 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ continue this fic!!!!!! ive been waiting a LONG time!!!! plzzzzz update SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Vashtya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 02:07 CDT
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WAIII...*wants more* updaaaateee..XD...seriously, this fic is great! :D
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 18:27 CDT
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Ps. Ur in my fave authors list thingy, lol i would have added tons of ppl but i didn't no how to.....
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 18:27 CDT
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*cries would u update id O asked very nicely? ALl my favourite authors won't update. Umbrella has even stopped her fic. Plz plz plz update! I lubb ur fic sooooooo much!!!
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Title: fic
Reviewed By: who cares? On: April 04, 2004 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue man!!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: Not giving it On: April 04, 2004 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man where did you get this idea?! shoot, I don't know what to say!! For one thing though Kagome wouldn't cuss like that (Actually she wouldn't have done almost anything like this fanfic!). But hey...Nice fic. Keep up the good work!!! Later
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Reviewed By: yusuke_lover On: April 01, 2004 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plzzzzzzzzz i beg of u write more to this story its sssssoooooooooooo so so so cool!!!!!!! i love this story plzzzz write more
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