| "Love yet to be found" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Love yet to be found
Reviewed By: Eternalskyking On: May 04, 2004 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
You could do much better,but the story is very pleasant to read so please continu I'd love to keep reading it ^__^
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh i bet this will be a really good story!! I hope you finish it, i know it'l be super.
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonFiend On: January 13, 2004 18:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I thought the story was interesting. Short, but interesting. I'm looking forward to see more.
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Title: WTF?
Reviewed By: writergirl On: January 06, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a four because I just thought you cut the story off to shortly. I may not have been able to read the whole thing, but it coudl be better.
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Reviewed By: LovingMeForever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
why did you write the chapter out of order?i got really confused when i was reading it.
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