| "It's About Time" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: short
Reviewed By: Chokoreeto Ame(not logged in) On: August 24, 2004 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was really well done, but you need to make your chapters longer. Short and sweet, isn't as good as longer chapters that are just as sweet. Anyways, I like where your going, it's kinda common and seemed like a lemon intro (which I'm not complaining about...) but I like it. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ebony Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 02:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!! I'v just read the first three Hana Kimi manga's and this was the ONLY fic I could find. I looked for like a half an hour!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kiss_harker On: July 17, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do like your writing. It's been done before, but you made it your own work very well. I saw no spelling errors. It was pretty fun to read, although I prefer other types of writing. Great Work. Keep it up.
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: yumemiru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got one word for you... Nice ^_~
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