| "His Metal Skin" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Bloodmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this fanfic. I could literally see the emotional turmoil in Mokuba. I especially liked the ending with the kiss and how you described Seto's blush as being "foreign and painful." Beautifully descriptive. Keep writing, you're very good. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bloodmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this fanfic. I could literally see the emotional turmoil in Mokuba. I especially liked the ending with the kiss and how you described Seto's blush as being "foreign and painful." Beautifully descriptive. Keep writing, you're very good. ^_^
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Reviewed By: GothVamp On: January 30, 2004 07:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this one. My favourite pairing yeeey. ^-^ Maybe you should have made it a bit longer, with a lemon in it? Just a suggestion
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