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| "Final Fantasy 6 - Slam Shuffle" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Read others of yours
Reviewed By: TerraChrono [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read other lemons of yours, and although the characters are placed in more.. unorthodox conditions, and you do occasionally portay them OOC, you do write very good. I think you have great potential. If you get the chance, read some of my fics. They're not all lemons, but I like feedback, especially from other writers
| Title: Decent
Reviewed By: Man Called True [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always thought Relm and Gau made a good pairing. Nice setup as well, and while (of course) it was violently OOC, I don't exactly look for consistency of character in a lemon. If you ever decide to do a sequel for this, I suggest Relm, Edgar, and that girl in Figaro Castle who talks about Edgar planning to marry her...
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